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"Good morning, Annie! Pancakes are ready."
Jack takes his hand off her shoulder. She <stützt sich hoch> and looks
around. James is driving the bus on a surprisingly very intact highway.
Yesterday's mountains are still visible in the far distance behind them.
A seeminly endless desert has taken their place <might benefit from a
description of said desert>. Annie gets up <need more descriptive way of
saying that> and goes to the improvised kitchen area. Jack wakes up
Michelle, then he tells James. <bus stops, engine turns off, they all sit
down around the table and start to eat, short mention of what the dogs up
to>
"So when are we gonna reach the <mining company> pit?", Michelle asks.
Jack looks at James. James tils his head slightly and shrugs.
"Like five hours ago?"
"Youre kidding."
"Didnt wanna wake you up."
"Uhh..."
He grins.
"Dont worry, I wont drive from here."
"Wait... doesnt that mean that were way ahead of schedule?"
James shrugs again, this time holding up his hands. She turns to Jack:
"How much ahead are we?"
Jack glances at his watch.
"About three hours. But if youre as lucky with the wind as James, well be
more ahead by the time we arrive."
"You didnt sleep, did you?"
"Sleep is overrated anyway - but if you allow it, Ill be going to sleep
very soon."
<missing section>
The four do quick work of the dishes. Annie washes them, Jack <rinses?
Basically, he drags them through a bowl with clean water.> them, James
dries them off, and Michelle puts them away. Jack goes to sleep after that,
the others go to the front. Michelle sits on the drivers seat and turns
the key. Nothing happens. "Oh, yeah, thats been a problem", James
remembers. "Can you open the door for a sec?" He grabs a big wrench and a
jumper cable, and heads outside. Michelle and Annie hear him opening some
panel in the back of the bus followed by arcing noises. The engine begins
to turn over. Michelle turns the key again. Finally, the engine roars to
life. James slams the panel shut and returns.
<yeah, revision needed, I know>