From 099e892f670138d47bc8506afe884d3e2320978e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Fri, 29 Sep 2023 14:19:25 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] 02 Wake Up: Fill in a commented section

---
 02-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html | 33 ++++++++++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/02-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html b/02-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html
index 2ec095e..a9ea386 100644
--- a/02-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html
+++ b/02-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <p>
   <span class="speech">Ahh fuck!</span> Jack exclaims in pain as he wakes
   up. He has a terrible headache. As he moves his hands up to hold his
-  head, he realizes that his entire body hurts. 
+  head, he realizes that his entire body hurts.<br />
   <span class="speech">Owwowwowwowwoww... Ouch!</span><br />
   <span class="speech">Emergency defrost complete. Entering low power
   mode.</span>
@@ -32,15 +32,15 @@
   of the bunker. He looks to the left: The wall is lined with other
   preservation chambers, all except one of them being powered down. In
   front of the back wall are desks holding a radio, a terminal, and some
-  <span class="comment"> need useful object here</span>. To the left of the
-  desks in the corner is a minicomputer in a half-height rack and a
-  teleprinter, and above it a phone on the wall - the usual Neotek
-  equipment. He looks to the right: More preservation chambers. Instead of
-  a wall, there&apos;s the bunker door - door is a bit of an
-  understatement, it&apos;s a massive gate. A small slither of light
-  passes under it. <span class="thought">These fucking idiots... They
-  didn&apos;t reseal it properly.</span> <span class="comment">not sure if
-  this is speech or a thought or both</span>
+  boxes. To the left of the desks in the corner is a minicomputer in a
+  half-height rack and a teleprinter, and above it a phone on the wall
+  &ndash; the usual Neotek equipment. He looks to the right: More
+  preservation chambers. Instead of a wall, there&apos;s the bunker door
+  &ndash; door is a bit of an understatement, it&apos;s a massive gate.
+  A small slither of light passes under it. <span class="thought">These
+  fucking idiots... They didn&apos;t reseal it properly.</span>
+  <span class="comment">not sure if this is speech or a thought or both
+  </span>
 </p>
 <p>
   He walks over to the door&apos;s control panel. The paint is flaking off
@@ -60,11 +60,18 @@
   empty preservaton chambers, he reaches the one that remains active.<br />
   <span class="speech">Hello Michelle.</span><br />
   He checks the status lights of her chamber.<br />
-  <span class="speech">I think I&apos;m gonna leave you in there for now.
-  Should be fine...</span><br />
+  <span class="speech">I think I&apos;m gonna leave you in there until I
+  find a way out of here. Should be fine...</span><br />
   He continues past the remaining empty chambers to the back of the bunker.
 </p>
-<p class="comment"> I forgot to have him look for tools first. </p>
+<p class="comment">
+  Jack opens the boxes on the desks looking for tools. He also rummages
+  through the cabinets and drawers in the kitchen area.
+  After finding some object that he could use as a screwdriver, he returns
+  to the door, taking off the control panel. He realizes that he has no
+  idea what he's doing so he attempts (and fails) to get the manual from
+  the computer.
+</p>
 <p>
   The phone lifts off the wall with a quiet click and Jack begins to dial.
   He holds the receiver to his ear - silence. Welp, another thing that