diff --git a/ph-diesel_creek.html b/ph-diesel_creek.html index fed5573..8ecb433 100644 --- a/ph-diesel_creek.html +++ b/ph-diesel_creek.html @@ -3,46 +3,47 @@

Michelle asks: And you really expect to find - machines here that aren't beyond repair?
+ machines here that can be salvaged?
The four are walking into a valley in a large forested area.
Jack replies: Right now, I'm not even sure this is the place – everything looks so different – but, if it is, we'll have plenty to choose from and a bunch more for spare parts.
- James gestures to the side and says: + James gestures to the side, saying: Look, over there.
He points out a group of very rusty and completely overgrown machines.
Annie wonders: How did they get inbetween the trees?
- Jack says: They didn't. This wasn't - a forest back then.
- They make their way over to them. + Jack says: They didn't. The machines + came first, the trees grew after. This wasn't a forest + back then.
+ They make their way over to take a closer look.

Jack says: Looks like these were already out of order before they were abandoned.
- He turns to Annie and James, patting the side of one of the machines. -
+ He turns to Annie and James: This is an excavator. We're looking for a big one like this, maybe a bit smaller, but not as small as that one - over there.
- He points to a small excavator that has a tree growing through - its cab.
- Do these excavators where the cab is the biggest - part have a specific name?
- James asks: Why not just use this one then? + over there – and preferably without trees growing out of + it...
+ He points to a small excavator that sits askew on a thick tree trunk + that had grown thrugh the floor and out the side. + Do these tiny excavators with large glass cabs + have a specific name?
+ James asks: Why not just use this one? What's wrong with it?
- This thing's just done for. Looks like - it was used as a spare parts donor. Tracks? Treads? - are missing, hydraulics for the bucket as well, and it looks - like the inside of the cab got completely dismantled.
+ This thing's just done for. Apart from it + being a pile of rust, it's missing its tracks + treads?, the hydraulics for moving the bucket, and it looks like + the inside of the cab got completely dismantled.
They take a quick look at the other machines around them. There is the other, much smaller excavator, a Kipper?, a Wie heißt diese Maschine mit Förderband, die Material sortiert?, and two - Radlader? Baccos?. All of them are missing - significant parts.
+ Radlader? Baccos?. All of them are rusted + beyond repair and missing integral parts.

A bit further down the valley, they approach a much larger collection of @@ -55,9 +56,10 @@ So these machines dug out the dome?
Well... no. That was mostly done using - explosives, the machines were there to collect the rubble and load it - onto trains. But they also played a big part in construction after - the digging was done.
+ explosives, conveyor belts, and trains. They used + Radlader? Baccos? to load stuff onto the conveyors but most of + the machines here were used in construction after the digging was + done.

research that needs to be done: @@ -65,5 +67,36 @@ When did they get the ability to use a jackhammer attachment? When did the cable-driven ones go out of fashion?

+

+ missing section +

+

+ Annie calls the others over to one of the buildings.
+ Look what I found...
+ Michelle arrives before Jack and she laughs. He arrives a moment + later and peeks inside. There sits a + cable shovel?, partially covered in rubble from the caved-in + roof – rusty but surprisingly intact.
+ Jack says: That's ... uhhh ... kind of + a historical artifact.
+ +

+

+ missing section +

+

+ + Things that need research: Did early hydraulic excavators have starter + engines (what were they called again?) or was that a thing of the past + by then?
+ Events:
+ -> they take off some access panels
+ -> they manage to get the starte engine going
+ -> large engine won't start (why?)
+
+