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   cables off the terminals, and hooks them up to his makeshift power
   supply. Then, he starts the generator and climbs into the train.
   Michelle follows him and they go to the driver's cabin. Jack turns
-  a key switch and parts of the dashboard light up. Then, he pushes the
-  engine start button. While holding it, he points to the fuel pressure
-  gauge and, slightly raising his voice to talk over the noise of the
-  engine turning over, he says:<br />
+  a key switch and part of the dashboard lights up. Then, he pushes the
+  engine start button. The engine begins to turn over. While holding
+  the button, Jack points to the fuel pressure gauge, slightly raising
+  his voice to talk over the engine:<br />
   <span class="quote speech">That&apos;s progress already.</span><br />
   The needle on the gauge slowly creeps to the right.<br />
   <span class="quote speech">Too slow though</span>, he adds after a