diff --git a/na-Telescope.html b/na-Telescope.html index 65c77f5..bb49464 100644 --- a/na-Telescope.html +++ b/na-Telescope.html @@ -52,9 +52,9 @@ one off to the side behind it is a smooth round dome with a slot cut out of it for a telescope to peek through. Well, it was smooth at one point – now, it has many holes with a tree growing out of the - largest one. The geodesic dome has ivy vines clinging to it but looks - otherwise surprisingly intact. The other buildings look like mostly - unremarkable ruins in various stages of decay. + largest one. The geodesic dome is partially covered in ivy vines but + looks otherwise intact. The other buildings look like mostly unremarkable + ruins in various stages of decay.

Michelle says:
@@ -73,7 +73,8 @@ It works similarly, just for imaging a much lower part of the electromagnetic spectrum. Stars give off a bunch more than just visible light.
- Can we try that one?
+ I have no idea what you just said but can we + try that one?
A lot of things would have to go right for that.