From 0f768ae21c307bd0f5bef16723e097822de1a95c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Wed, 27 Aug 2025 10:24:02 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] 'na' Telescope: minor revision (three sentences lol)

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 na-Telescope.html | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/na-Telescope.html b/na-Telescope.html
index 65c77f5..bb49464 100644
--- a/na-Telescope.html
+++ b/na-Telescope.html
@@ -52,9 +52,9 @@
   one off to the side behind it is a smooth round dome with a slot cut out
   of it for a telescope to peek through. Well, it <i>was</i> smooth at one
   point &ndash; now, it has many holes with a tree growing out of the
-  largest one. The geodesic dome has ivy vines clinging to it but looks
-  otherwise surprisingly intact. The other buildings look like mostly
-  unremarkable ruins in various stages of decay.
+  largest one. The geodesic dome is partially covered in ivy vines but
+  looks otherwise intact. The other buildings look like mostly unremarkable
+  ruins in various stages of decay.
 </p>
 <p>
   Michelle says:<br />
@@ -73,7 +73,8 @@
   <span class="quote speech">It works similarly, just for imaging a much
   lower part of the electromagnetic spectrum. Stars give off a bunch more
   than just visible light.</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Can we try that one?</span><br />
+  <span class="quote speech">I have no idea what you just said but can we
+  try that one?</span><br />
   <span class="quote speech">A lot of things would have to go right for
   that.</span>
 </p>