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   It takes them a while to get to the road. The pavement is cracked with
   plants growing out of it. Ahead of them is a bridge over a small river.
   They cross it about half-way where Annie stops and turns to the railing.
-  She almost leans against it, befefore a thought shoots into her mind:
+  She almost leans against it, before a thought shoots into her mind:
   <span class="quote non-speech">What if it breaks?</span>
   She grabs on to it and shakes ... herself. The railing stands firm.
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-  Jack joins her looking down at what&apos;s below and says:
+  Jack joins her, looking down at what&apos;s below, and says:
   <span class="quote speech">Learning quickly, huh?</span><br />
   <span class="quote speech">Seeing it once is good enough.</span><br />
   A small stream flows there, cutting deep into the ground, lined by