From 170c93cfe571ee462ccca9ee2378631bc634a897 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BodgeMaster <> Date: Fri, 10 May 2024 18:55:04 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] 'vb' (Emily incoming call): continue writing This chapter was more of an idea until now, now it is starting to turn into a chapter. The file has been renamed to reflect the title on the page. --- ...ction.html => vb--Emily_incoming_call.html | 35 ++++++++++++++++++- 1 file changed, 34 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) rename vb--Emily_incoming_connection.html => vb--Emily_incoming_call.html (59%) diff --git a/vb--Emily_incoming_connection.html b/vb--Emily_incoming_call.html similarity index 59% rename from vb--Emily_incoming_connection.html rename to vb--Emily_incoming_call.html index fc417aa..47449b4 100644 --- a/vb--Emily_incoming_connection.html +++ b/vb--Emily_incoming_call.html @@ -13,7 +13,13 @@ drrrrrrrrinnng
- Emily finds herself still staring into the sky. She lifts her head. + Emily finds herself laying on the floor, still staring into the sky. +
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++ She lifts her head.
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That's the phone in the control room.
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++ Emily turns onto her side and slowly gets up. Her back hurts. +
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++ On my way, I'm on my way. she says + in a soft matten? voice. +
++ The phone rings a few more times but stops before she can make it there. + She realizes how thirsty she is and takes a detour to the nearest kitchen. + She thinks Water! Yes! but her + excitement quickly turns into disgust as a brown liquid full of clumps + sprudelt? from the tap. +
+
+ After getting water from Tony's lab and feeding the mice –
+ which she had also neglected to do – she goes into the main
+ control room. The terminal for communication with Earth is lit up,
+ showing a message. Emily sits down and writes in response:
+ Lena is dead.
+
She gets up and realizes that she had been completely neglecting her