From 1735f7c5e7836a9e7c036ba204ef3e7122cd2123 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Mon, 9 Oct 2023 00:21:10 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] index: Make a better version of what I just did

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 </p>
 <p>
   Welcome, reader! This website is basically a book that I am working on
-  on the metro during my daily commute.<br />
-  It&apos;s an adventure story set in a post-apocalyptic retro-futuristic
-  world. If you&apos;re into this kind of stuff, feel free to hang around
-  and <b>please give feedback</b>, I need it to turn what looks good to me
-  into something that is actually passable. I&apos;m @bodgemaster on
-  Discord, please direct it to my DMs or to the story channel if you have
-  access to that (you know who you are :] ...).
+  on the metro during my daily commute. It&apos;s an adventure story set
+  in a post-apocalyptic retro-futuristic world. Progress is kinda slow due
+  to my limited time but if you&apos;re into this kind of stuff, feel free
+  to hang around, I&apos;d appreciate it, and <b>please give feedback</b>.
+  I need it to turn what looks good to me into something that is actually
+  passable. I&apos;m @bodgemaster on Discord, please direct your feedback
+  to my DMs or to the story channel if you have access to that (you know
+  who you are :] ...).
 </p>
 <p>
   Below, in the table of contents, you find links to all the chapters.