diff --git a/va-Alone-Lena_death.html b/va-Alone-Lena_death.html index 230a392..003d484 100644 --- a/va-Alone-Lena_death.html +++ b/va-Alone-Lena_death.html @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ Tony's cure – no matter what risk it posed ... – maybe some of them would have made it.
What about you? Emily asks with a - slither of hope in her voice.
+ sliver of hope in her voice.
No – no cure can save me, it's too late.
Emily tears up. note: Slightly. Is there a better @@ -86,16 +86,17 @@ it and opens the valves again. Just as she is done with that, her own alarm goes off. Disappointed/annoyed reaction

-

- Emily sits down next to Lena again, but there is no conversation. -

- Emily looks at Lena – she had closed her eyes. As if she knew Emily - was looking she opens them, looking directly at her. - Gripping? her hand as she speaks. - some meaningful last words? Then she lets go - and closes her eyes again. A couple minutes later, she stops breathing. - wording + Emily sits down across from Lena, radio still on, but there is only silence, + occasionally broken by the crackle of cosmic radiation. She looks at Lena + – who had closed her eyes. As if she knew Emily was looking, she opens + them, looking directly at her, taking her hands and holding them tightly + as she speaks:
+ There will come a day when you have no choice but + to leave. I hope that day will find you strong and brave to beat the odds + again. You got this, little one.
+ Then she lets go and closes her eyes again. Emily moves next to her and holds + her hand as Lena drifts away. A few minutes pass and she stops breathing.

Emily sits next to Lena for a while, completely out of it, her mind