From 1850d1fca5fd137c11b52041b33698b2a6312914 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BodgeMaster <> Date: Wed, 10 Sep 2025 09:36:12 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] All chapters: Housekeeping - Added 'perspective: ' comments to all chapters - Removed useless/redundant chapter outlines - Added a missing heading - Fixed a wrong closing tag - Fixed a typo --- 01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html | 1 + 02-Unlikely_Encounter-Annie-intro.html | 1 + 03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html | 1 + 04-Return_Null.html | 70 +++++++------- 05-Eventful_Evening-secret_organization.html | 82 +--------------- 06-Library_At_Night.html | 1 + fa-open_up.html | 1 + ga-Who_Died_Today-Emily_intro.html | 53 +---------- ja-erosion-michelle_wakeup.html | 1 + jc-night_watch.html | 1 + ka-I_Like_Trains-finding_the_train.html | 1 + km-ran_when_parked.html | 1 + ma-Escape-from_dome_city.html | 1 + mb-First_Steps_Outside.html | 1 + mc-welcome_home.html | 1 + na-Telescope.html | 1 + oa-Lab_Rat-Emily_lab_incident.html | 1 + pa-Bare_Necessities.html | 1 + pb-Fine_Print.html | 1 + ph-diesel_creek.html | 1 + pk--lena_first_contact.html | 1 + pm--emily_wake_up_again.html | 1 + qa-Overdue_Maintenence-power_station.html | 3 +- qb-Banished.html | 1 + qc-the_floor_is_water.html | 1 + ra--Emily_first_contact.html | 98 ++++++-------------- ta-consulting-no_u_dont_have_train.html | 1 + va-Alone-Lena_death.html | 71 +------------- vb--Emily_incoming_call.html | 1 + zb-Pancakes-reaching_nova_metropolis.html | 1 + zd-Nova_Metropolis.html | 1 + zy-Landing_Troubles.html | 1 + zz--end.html | 1 + 33 files changed, 93 insertions(+), 311 deletions(-) diff --git a/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html b/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html index 5b41304..64e6b12 100644 --- a/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html +++ b/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html @@ -1,6 +1,7 @@ Wake Up!
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Wake Up!

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Awh fuck! Jack exclaims in pain as he wakes up. He has a terrible headache. While moving his hands up to hold diff --git a/02-Unlikely_Encounter-Annie-intro.html b/02-Unlikely_Encounter-Annie-intro.html index 7040674..dcd75eb 100644 --- a/02-Unlikely_Encounter-Annie-intro.html +++ b/02-Unlikely_Encounter-Annie-intro.html @@ -1,6 +1,7 @@ Unlikely Encounter

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Unlikely Encounter

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beep beep

diff --git a/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html b/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html index 63270a9..11e8ce5 100644 --- a/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html +++ b/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html @@ -1,6 +1,7 @@ A Simple Errand
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A Simple Errand

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Next stop: Central Square
Annie looks up. That's where she has to get off. She only needs to diff --git a/04-Return_Null.html b/04-Return_Null.html index d98cd13..10d6b3d 100644 --- a/04-Return_Null.html +++ b/04-Return_Null.html @@ -1,43 +1,7 @@ Rerturn Null

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Outline:

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Return Null

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Jack stands bowed down in front of the half-height rack, pulling on the handles of the secondary hard drive. It takes an unusual amount @@ -148,5 +112,35 @@ o×· o ,× ., * o · '+, '* o '+, . .. //TODO //TODO: more log messages left by people +

+ missing: Jack reads the logbook, then he dials into the AgriWorks system + and talks to Annie.
+ They talk about a few topics: +

+

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diff --git a/05-Eventful_Evening-secret_organization.html b/05-Eventful_Evening-secret_organization.html index 584d080..bec2b23 100644 --- a/05-Eventful_Evening-secret_organization.html +++ b/05-Eventful_Evening-secret_organization.html @@ -1,85 +1,7 @@ Eventful Evening
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Eventful Evening

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- If you're just here to read, scroll down past the outline. -

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- Outline: -

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Annie looks through the window in the door as the train enters the station. The platform is empty except for a shady figure in a hoodie @@ -158,7 +80,7 @@ Lucas walks up to it. Thank you!
Annie takes a moment to process the situation. Is there a better way to say this?
- Thanks. + Thanks.

A woman addresses her grandpa: Karl, you two diff --git a/06-Library_At_Night.html b/06-Library_At_Night.html index 06ca48d..a52b948 100644 --- a/06-Library_At_Night.html +++ b/06-Library_At_Night.html @@ -1,6 +1,7 @@ Library At Night

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Library At Night

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11:30 PM – Isabelle and Annie find themselves at the side entrance to the library. They try a couple keys before finding the right one and diff --git a/fa-open_up.html b/fa-open_up.html index 9a44f08..85d53fa 100644 --- a/fa-open_up.html +++ b/fa-open_up.html @@ -1,5 +1,6 @@ Open Up!

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Open Up!

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This is probably a working title until I come up with something better. Just thought it was funny. Too similar to "Wake up!" tho. diff --git a/ga-Who_Died_Today-Emily_intro.html b/ga-Who_Died_Today-Emily_intro.html index 41522c8..a3961e4 100644 --- a/ga-Who_Died_Today-Emily_intro.html +++ b/ga-Who_Died_Today-Emily_intro.html @@ -1,60 +1,11 @@ Who died today?

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Who Died Today?

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- If you are just here for reading, skip past the outline. -

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- Outline: + missing stuff: