From 1877855c54b6a27f877b1138d1a4456a896c6956 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BodgeMaster <> Date: Wed, 24 Apr 2024 09:41:37 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] notes/story: update things to match the actual story --- notes/story.txt | 41 ++++++++++++++++++++--------------------- 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-) diff --git a/notes/story.txt b/notes/story.txt index b5a4b9b..0a79ac0 100644 --- a/notes/story.txt +++ b/notes/story.txt @@ -3,19 +3,18 @@ Big-picture story overview: Story begins on Tue, 2106-06-01 -[partial] Jack wakes up +Jack wakes up -> finds himself trapped in a bunker -> leaves Michelle frozen -> attempts to fix the door to get out - -> [missing] no tools, improvisation + -> no tools, improvisation -> tries and fails to get a service manual from the computer dur to a broken hard drive - -> [implied] connects to the AgriWorks computer + -> connects to the AgriWorks computer -[partial} Annie finds out about his situation +[revision needed] Annie finds out about his situation -> finds the terminal --> [partial] figures out she (or anyone else for that matter) can't help - him directly +-> figures out she (or anyone else for that matter) can't help him directly -> agrees to get him the manual -> leaves work for the day @@ -24,17 +23,17 @@ Annie goes to the library -> instead, she gets a mysterious invite [partial] Jack messes with the computer --> [missing] inspects the damage on the hard drive +-> inspects the damage on the hard drive +-> [partial] Jack prints off the logbook -> [missing] talks to Annie again -> outcome of the library visit -> Annie figures out shift and special chars -> Annie asks a bunch of questions about Jack and his situation --> [partial] Jack prints off the logbook [partial] Secret organization meeting -> Annie meets with Lucas --> [needs revision] finds out that Karl is also part of the group --> [needs revision] Lucas needs to go but leaves his keys +-> finds out that Karl is also part of the group +-> Lucas needs to go but leaves his keys -> [change] He needs to leave immediately -> [missing] He says something to the effect of "leave them at xyz location when you're done" @@ -56,9 +55,16 @@ Annie goes to the library -> Jack takes a look at the file -> turns out it's encrypted -> Jack can write a program to break the encryption but for that to - be feasibly, they need a computer with a Number Cruncher 2000 card + be feasibla, they need a computer with a Number Cruncher 2000 card -> Karl asks if Jack could/would open the airlocks from the outside +[partial] Emily intro +-> Emily wakes up, Lena is in her room crying +-> introduce the fact that there is a dangerous pathogen wreaking havoc on + the moon +-> ??? +-> funeral + [missing] Next secret organization meetup -> short interaction between Annie and Lucas -> "You got your keys?" "I got my keys, thx." @@ -67,13 +73,6 @@ Annie goes to the library -> has to end with law enforcement arriving at the bar for an unrelated reason and Kate telling them to gtfo -[partial] Emily intro --> Emily wakes up, Lena is in her room crying --> introduce the fact that there is a dangerous pathogen wreaking havoc on - the moon --> ??? --> funeral - [missing] Annie stops working at AgriWorks -> (this chapter can be moved to wherever is convenient) -> Annie talks to Jack over the terminal. They talk about all sorts of @@ -138,13 +137,13 @@ Annie goes to the library -> some ppl get arrested (Lucas?) -> another news segment along the lines of "In a bizarre turn of events..." -[partial] Annie meets Jack +Annie meets Jack and leaves the dome -> Jack drives a train into the dome -> original plan was for Annie to hand over the documents -> police are at Annie's drop-off point, arresting Karl's friend - -> she stays on the train and leave the city + -> she stays on the train and leaves the city -[partial] Annie sees the outside world for the first time +Annie sees the outside world for the first time -> Annie enjoys the view from the side of the valley -> They make their way to where used to be a bridge and climb down -> continue towards the bunker