Hey, wait...
- The guy had made his way to the door and looks directly at her.
- It's him from behind the library counter.
+ He had made his way to the door and looks directly at her. It's the
+ guy from behind the library counter.
We're gonna take this one for a couple
stations.
- Annie steps aside and he gets on the train as well.
- My name is Lucas, nice to meet you.
-
- He extends his hand as the doors close.
- Annie.
- He probably knew that already, right?
+ Annie steps aside and he gets on.
+ I'm Lucas, nice to meet you. He
+ extends his hand.
+ Annie. He probably knew that already,
+ right?
+ The door chime sounds and the doors close.
Sorry for being late.
- The hum of the motors sets in and the train begins to move.
- Perfect timing, I'd say.
+ The hum of the motors sets in and the train begins to move.
+ Perfect timing, I'd say. We were gonna
+ take this one anyway.
He makes a short pause before continuing quietly:
So about that interaction we had earlier today
– I assume you want to leave the dome?
@@ -128,18 +127,17 @@
The streets are alive with people, seeminly few of them purposefully - moving in a specific direction; most of them are just meandering from - bar to bar. The street they are walking down is illuminated by strings - of lights hanging from the buildings and between street lights. The - muffled bass of techno coming from one of the buildings is in the air. - She enjoys the atmosphere, she hadn't been here in a little while. + moving in a specific direction; most are just meandering from bar to + bar. The street they are walking down is illuminated by strings of lights + hanging from the buildings and between street lights. The muffled bass of + techno is in the air. She enjoys the atmosphere, she hadn't been + here in a little while.
- Lucas turns left and enters one of the bars, Annie still following him.
- They make their way through the crowded bar towards the counter. The air
- feels dense and depleted, and carries the smell of alcohol. Live
- musicians are playing Idk? Music genre? Need ideas
- on a small stage area in the corner.
+ Lucas suddenly turns left and enters one of the bars. Annie follows him.
+ The air feels dense and depleted, and carries the smell of alcohol. A guy
+ is playing ragtime on a piano in the corner. They make their way through
+ the crowded room towards the counter.
Hey Kate, I'll take a Braincell Rattler
and my uhh... friend here looks like she needs a coffee.
Okay. Going to the back room?
@@ -151,20 +149,20 @@
Lucas takes off his hoodie and hangs it on a hook on the wall. Annie does
the same with her jacket. She looks into the room: A bunch of people
sitting around a large, round table - to her surprise including her
- grandpa.
- Grandpa Karl?
- Language intuition question: Is this how one would
- realistically refer to their grandpa?
- Hi Annie!
- TODO: Fix this
- Before she has time to voice her confusion, they get interrupted:
- Here you go, your drinks. Enjoy!
- Lucas walks up to the window that connects to behind the counter.
- Thank you!
- Annie takes a second to regain her composure.
- I don't think this is a great way to say that, Idk.
+ grandpa. Before she has time to voice her confusion, Kate sets their
+ drinks on a small table next to a window connecting to behind the
+ counter.
+ Here you go, enjoy!
+ Lucas walks up to it. Thank you!
+ Annie takes a moment to process the situation.
+ Is there a better way to say this?
Thanks.
+ Someone else to the grandpa: Addresses him with Karl. + ... + Karl to Annie: I guess I owe you an explanation. +
They sit down at the table. Karl starts introducing people and some introduce themselves. Then, he continues talking about the group's