From 1e6418adcc2bb9fc5329ed265055a2cdfe2ae745 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BodgeMaster <> Date: Mon, 25 Mar 2024 07:18:53 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] 'pm' Banished: continue writing --- pm-Banished.html | 44 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++------ 1 file changed, 38 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/pm-Banished.html b/pm-Banished.html index 9cb6710..fe37ec9 100644 --- a/pm-Banished.html +++ b/pm-Banished.html @@ -5,16 +5,48 @@ Isabelle!
Lucas!
I got banished.
- Wait what?
- The guard in front of her turns around:
+ What...?
+ The guard behind Isabelle gives her a stern look, the one in front of her + turns around:
No chit-chat, move along.
Isabelle takes a moment to understand the implication of what Lucas had said.
...ohhhhh. Congrats!
- The guards grab her by the arms and drag her away from his cell.
- Move.
- Lucas: - Good luck with your trial! + The guards grab her by the arms and drag her away.
+ Move. +

+

+ They bring her to a room adjacent to the main court room where a bunch + of important-looking people in suits are waiting for her. They introduce + themselves and they all, including herself, sit down around a somewhat + large table. One of the suits takes the word:
+ Does that work in English?
+ Under normal circumstances, robbery, + compromising operationally critical systems, and conspiracy of terrorism + would land you in jail? prison? for a long + time. We're willing to make an exception here since you caused rather + little actual harm – if you are willing to accept this deal... +
+ He grabs few sheets of paper from his bag + Aktentasche? and slides them over.
+ Basically admit to everything you're + accused of and you will get to leave Sunside Cove. You'll be free + as long as you never come back.
+ She absentmindedly acknowledges what he said as she is already reading + the first page.
+ Isabelle questions the deal.
+ What about bogus charge xyz? take it or leave it
+ What are they trying to get out of this deal? avoiding controversy and + removing her from the city
+ Are they going to honor it? +
+

+

+ Note: It was always intended that at least some of the rebels who got + caught will be released to the outside. However, before starting this + chapter, I have never actually considered what this means for the rest + of the story. The following chapters weren't originally written + with this in mind and may need to be revised to take it into account.