Annie hears Jack press some buttons and the clicking of relays. The
- motors go quiet and the train starts to slow down. She tries to open her
+ motors go quiet, leaving the train rolling. She tries to open her
eyes but it's still too bright.
I think you could use a pair of
sunglasses.
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index 47f97d6..ba5983a 100644
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+++ b/oa-Lab_Rat-Emily_lab_incident.html
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
She storms off into the hallway; Lena jumps up and runs after her.
- As she runs through the door to the lab module, Emily smashes the hammer + As Emily runs through the door to the lab module, she smashes the hammer into its control panel. Arcing noises, the hissing of air pressure getting released, the broken equipment alarm beeps. The door comes falling down behind her, slamming into the floor and latching with a @@ -43,10 +43,10 @@ the workbenches. She lifts it up and looks through the clear, blue liquid. Tony had written some science-y words on the flask along with "cure 5x concentrated", and closed it off with a glass stopper. - Emily removes the stopper and grabs a small beaker from the drying rack - on the wall above the sink. She pours some of the liquid into the beaker, - sets the flask aside, and tops it off with water from the tap. Holding - the beaker in her hands, she hesitates. + Emily removes it and grabs a small beaker from the drying rack above + the sink. She pours some of the liquid into the beaker, sets the flask + aside, and tops it off with tap water. Holding the beaker in her hands, + she hesitates.
Buzzing noises and clicking from the door. The latching mechanism opens. diff --git a/zy-Landing_Troubles.html b/zy-Landing_Troubles.html index bd6b126..e901e22 100644 --- a/zy-Landing_Troubles.html +++ b/zy-Landing_Troubles.html @@ -12,8 +12,9 @@ Emily stares at the control panel for a moment trying to think. She grabs her emergency notes and frantically searches for the relevant section. After finally finding the right page, she presses a few buttons on the - keyboard. The screen clears and shows the word "HALTED". Then, - she flips a bunch of switches to unlock the controls. Clicking and + keyboard. The screen clears and shows the word "HALTED". + + Then, she flips a bunch of switches to unlock the controls. Clicking and clanging under the control panel. Throttle lever and position controls start floating Looking at the next page of her notes, she realizes that the order has been messed up. Again, she