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| <!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> First Steps Outside </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body> | ||||
| 
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| <h1> First Steps Outside</h1> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   The station is is much larger than any of the metro stations inside the | ||||
|   dome. It has many platforms. Portions of the tall roof that is supported | ||||
|   by long pillars have caved in and what's still standing has holes. | ||||
|   Rays of light poke through holes in the walls and the roof. All of that | ||||
|   is visually stunning but what really catches Annie's eyes are the | ||||
|   plants everywhere. Parts of the platforms are densely covered in the | ||||
|   thin, green blades of some plant giving them a fuzzy look. Vines cling to | ||||
|   the walls and pillars, crawl along gaps and edges, and hang from rusty | ||||
|   beams and the fringes of the caved in roof sections. Moss grows on the | ||||
|   rusted benches and trash cans. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   After running over a bunch of bushes and tall flowers that have taken | ||||
|   root on the tracks, Jack brings the train to a stop next to a staircase | ||||
|   in the center of the platform.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Exit to the right</span>, he says in unison with the | ||||
|   automated voice before turning the switch for the doors and gesturing | ||||
|   towards the passenger area.<br /> <span class="comment">br here?</span> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">After you.</span> | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Annie walks over to the closest door and pushes the button. Pressurized | ||||
|   air hisses and the left half opens with a squeeking noise. They step out | ||||
|   onto the platform. Annie breathes the warm air. It smells of the run-over | ||||
|   plants. Insects are buzzing about, and the wind rustles through the | ||||
|   leaves. She crouches down and touches the carpet of green fuzziness.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Grass. It grows pretty much everywhere, usually much | ||||
|   taller than this though.</span><br /> | ||||
|   She looks up at him.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">I knew there would be more plants out here... I | ||||
|   didn't expect that many of them.</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Welcome to the outside world. Wanna take a quick | ||||
|   look around?</span><br /> | ||||
|   She gets up.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Sure.</span> | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   They walk down a flight of stairs taking them to a tunnel under the | ||||
|   platforms. The floor is covered in water so they follow a ledge on the | ||||
|   side. Jack leads Annie up the stairs to the last platform. From there, | ||||
|   they step outside through a side entrance. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Annie is hit by the light and warmth of the setting sun. She closes her | ||||
|   eyes and faces it for a moment.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">This is nice.</span> Then, she turns to Jack. | ||||
|   <span class="speech">And this light is just always up there?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="comment">Jack chuckles</span> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Well... No. Only during the day.</span><br /> | ||||
|   She looks around. They are standing on a balcony-like platform overlooking | ||||
|   a city in a valley. She walks over to the rusted railing and goes to lean | ||||
|   against it.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Don't lean on that.</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Why not?</span> She steps back.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Watch.</span><br /> | ||||
|   He kicks it. Loud cracking follows, and the ringing of metal. A roughly | ||||
|   two meter wide section of the railing breaks loose and falls. Annie takes | ||||
|   a bigger step back. The railing crashes into the ground below with a loud | ||||
|   ringing bang.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">How did you know?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Be careful around old buildings. I made the same | ||||
|   mistake over there.</span><br /> | ||||
|   He points to another missing section in the railing. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Cautiously stepping back to the edge, Annie looks down. Bushes cover the | ||||
|   hillside below the tall embankment wall that holds the station, | ||||
|   overgrowing everything. The walls of small ruins and half fallen-in | ||||
|   fences stick out here and there, and the bushes are interrupted by what | ||||
|   remains of roads and staircases. Small rivers cut through the landscape. | ||||
|   Annie looks up. The ruins further down the valley are larger the closer | ||||
|   they are to the center of the urban area below.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Wooow</span>, she utters in astonishment.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Ivydale - or at least what remains of it.</span> | ||||
|   <br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">It's much bigger than <dome city>.</span> | ||||
|   <br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Many things are bigger than <dome city>. | ||||
|   It's <span class="comment">This is</span> the smaller of two sister | ||||
|   cities.</span> He points towards another urban center in the distance. | ||||
|   <span class="speech">That over there is Sentinel Shores, the place I | ||||
|   used to call home.</span> | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   After showing her some notable landmarks, Jack leads Annie to the end of | ||||
|   the station that they entered it from. The balcony-like walkway turns | ||||
|   into a wide staircase where the mountain extends over the tunnels and the | ||||
|   back wall of the station. It leads down to a collapsed bridge next to a | ||||
|   large waterfall. Annie marvels at the sheer amount of water flowing by, | ||||
|   something that she's never seen before. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Jack goes ahead, climbing down the wall where the bridge used to begin | ||||
|   by grabbing onto the edges of the large sandstone blocks. Annie struggles | ||||
|   to follow. After what feels like an eternity, she manages to get half-way | ||||
|   down the wall.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">You can jump from there.</span><br /> | ||||
|   They make their way across the fast-flowing river by stepping on large | ||||
|   stones in the water, and continue through the bushes towards Outpost 53. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
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| <!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> <Emily Lab Incident> </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body> | ||||
| 
 | ||||
| <h1> <Emily Lab Incident> </h1> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   If you are here for reading, skip past the outline. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   *Outline:* | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <ul> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     At this point, there are three survivors on the moon base: | ||||
|     <ul> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         Emily | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         Lena | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         other crew member | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|     </ul> | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     The other crew member is close to dying | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     Begin with dialog | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     Emily grabs a hammer and runs through the base followed by Lena | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     She reaches the lab and smashes the control panel for the dorr while | ||||
|     running inside causing the door to close and lock | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     She drinks some left over chemical concoction | ||||
|     <ul> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         possibly after messing with it following some instructions she finds | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|     </ul> | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     Lena starts to break the door open, the other person just arrives there | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     Emily's body is filled with pain and she falls to the floor | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     the door gets broken open just before she drifts out of consciousness | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     she drifts in and out of consciousness | ||||
|     <ul> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         getting carried down the hallway | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         in her bed vomiting | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|     </ul> | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
| </ul> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Why not?</span><br /> | ||||
|   Emily looks back and forth between Lena and the man on the bed. | ||||
|   <span class="comment">needs rephrasing because he isn't a stranger | ||||
|   </span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Tony said he had some success with his mice, why | ||||
|   shouldn't we try it?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Tony also died after</span> – he is | ||||
|   interrupted by coughing – <span class="speech">after trying it | ||||
|   on himself.</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Not like anything else is gonna happen to | ||||
|   us...</span><br /> | ||||
|   Lena shakes her head.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">I don't want to live my remaining days alone. | ||||
|   Just don't do it, please.</span><br /> | ||||
|   Emily gets up and wanders around the module. Her eyes fall on the drawers | ||||
|   in the adjacent maintenance module. She has an idea...<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Emily, where are you going?</span><br /> | ||||
|   She steps inside and rummages through a bunch of drawers, leaving them | ||||
|   open as she opens the next one.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">What are you doing with that hammer?</span><br /> | ||||
|   She storms off into the hallway; Lena follows her. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   As she runs through the door to the lab module, she smashes the hammer | ||||
|   into its control panel. Arcing noises, the hissing of air pressure | ||||
|   getting released, the broken equipment alarm beeps. The door comes | ||||
|   falling down behind her, slamming into the floor and latching with a | ||||
|   loud click. She looks around for a moment as she catches her breath. The | ||||
|   walls are lined with work benches and cupboards above them. In the | ||||
|   center is an additional large workbench where Tony's lab mice are | ||||
|   still running around in their cage, oblivious to the situation. Emily had | ||||
|   kept them as pets after he died. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Banging on the door - Lena is outside. Emily walks over to the | ||||
|   Erlenmeyer flask that's sitting next to the sink in one of the | ||||
|   workbenches that line the walls. She lifts it up and looks through the | ||||
|   clear, blue liquid. Tony had written some science-y words on the flask | ||||
|   along with "cure 5x concentrated", and closed it off with a | ||||
|   glass stopper. Emily removes the stopper and grabs a small beaker from | ||||
|   the drying rack on the wall above the sink. She pours some of the liquid | ||||
|   into the beaker, sets the flask aside, and tops it off with water from | ||||
|   the tap. Holding the beaker in her hands, she hesitates. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Buzzing noises and clicking from the door. The latching mechanism opens. | ||||
|   Emily's hesitation is over, she lifts the beaker to her mouth and | ||||
|   drinks the liquid. It has a pungent smell and burns in her throat but she | ||||
|   downs it in two gulps. The door moves up a bit. Through the opening, she | ||||
|   hears Lena struggling on the other side. A foot appears in the door, | ||||
|   followed by Lena's hands. Emily begins to feel dizzy, she sets the | ||||
|   beaker onto the center workbench and holds on to the edge of the work | ||||
|   surface. Lena slowly lifts the door and pushes it back into the ceiling, | ||||
|   holding a screwdriver in her mouth. The panel covering the latching | ||||
|   mechanism has been removed and is leaning against the wall. Emily starts | ||||
|   to move towards the door but feels too dizzy to walk. She still sees | ||||
|   Lena jam the screwdriver in the side of the door before her knees give | ||||
|   out and she falls. A burning sensation spreads throughout her body as | ||||
|   she lays on the floor. Lena starts to yell at her but she drifts out of | ||||
|   consciousness before she can process any of the words. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   She wakes up briefly while getting carried down the hallway. The pain is | ||||
|   unbearable. In an attempt to scream, she sighs before everything goes | ||||
|   black again. The next time she regains consciousness is while throwing | ||||
|   up in her bed. She gasps for air, then she drifts away again. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
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| <!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Basic Needs </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body> | ||||
| 
 | ||||
| <h1> Basic Needs</h1> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Jack drives into a dried-out river. A bit away from the other side is a | ||||
|   group of houses that – while they have certainly seen better days | ||||
|   – aren't ruins. The truck struggles to get traction in the | ||||
|   sand on the other side of the river bed. After getting stuck, he backs up | ||||
|   and turns into the river. He accelerates, the engine roars, then he | ||||
|   steers it back onto the side of the river. The truck gets stuck again. | ||||
|   This process repeats twice more before they finally make it out and back | ||||
|   onto the tall grass that covers the area. Jack drives over to the remains | ||||
|   of a road that lead to the settlement. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   He parks in front of an old store.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">This is it, I guess.</span><br /> | ||||
|   They get out and start walking towards the door. A small dog runs up to | ||||
|   greet them, jumping around, running in circles, and wagging its tail. | ||||
|   It picks up a stick and drops it in front of Annie. She crouches down, | ||||
|   pets the dog, and picks up the stick. The dog bites into the other end | ||||
|   and pulls on it.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="comment">note: need reason for Jack to go ahead, also better | ||||
|   wording</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">I'll be inside.</span><br /> | ||||
|   Jack goes into the store. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   <span class="comment">note: need to state that the man appears to be in | ||||
|   his 60s</span><br /> | ||||
|   After playing with the dog for a bit, Annie follows. The man behind the | ||||
|   counter is talking to Jack:<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">I mean in the long run. We have plenty of food right | ||||
|   now but, since the <river name> has changed course, we don't | ||||
|   even have enough water to grow crops for ourselves. The cisterns and | ||||
|   wells simply don't cut it.</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">So, basically, you're saying you need | ||||
|   water.</span><br /> | ||||
|   The man interrupts the conversation and looks at Annie:<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Good afternoon, what can I do for you?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">I'm with him.</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">I see.</span><br /> | ||||
|   He turns back to Jack:<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Listen, we don't just need a little bit of | ||||
|   water. The amount of water we need can't simply be carried here or | ||||
|   we'd do it ourselves. And we need it regularly and consistently. | ||||
|   When the <river> still flowed here, water userd to flow into our | ||||
|   irrigation system upstream and got distributed to all the fields and | ||||
|   greenhouses from there.</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">I know you need an industrial quantity of water. | ||||
|   We can get you an industrial quantity of water. Will you give us food if | ||||
|   we supply you?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="comment">"Who is *we*?"</span><br /> | ||||
|   He musters Jack for a moment.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">And how do you wanna get it here?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">By train - assuming the railroad south of here is | ||||
|   in a serviceable state.</span> Seeing the man's confusion, Jack | ||||
|   adds: <span class="speech">Let that be my problem to solve. Will you | ||||
|   trade water for food?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">I'm gonna have to discuss that with the others. | ||||
|   Wait outside.</span> | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   After playing with the dog some more, they get approached by a group of | ||||
|   people, amongst them the man from the store. They shake hands. Jack | ||||
|   repeats his idea to supply water by train in exchange for crops.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">What's this train you're talking | ||||
|   of?</span>, one of them asks.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">A large vehicle from the old world. It drives on | ||||
|   tracks like the ones that should be south of here.</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">So that's what these rails were used for... | ||||
|   But that's still pretty far from here, how do you wanna transport | ||||
|   the water here?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">That irrigation system of yours... Can we take a | ||||
|   look at it?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">I see where you're trying to go with this. | ||||
|   It's still not particularly close to the rails.</span> | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   After a bit of additional back and forth, they agree on a plan. The man | ||||
|   who did most of the talking asks a girl:<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Mary, can you go, show them around?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Sure, follow me.</span> | ||||
|   <span class="comment">It's a bit of a walk...</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Wait</span>, Jack stops her, | ||||
|   <span class="speech">We're here with a truck.</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">So that's <i>your</i> car? Cool! I've only | ||||
|   ever seen one working car in the city. So we're gonna drive | ||||
|   there?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">If you show us the way.</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Let's go!</span> | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p class="comment"> | ||||
|   Not sure of this should be the end of a chapter or if I should continue | ||||
|   here. The way this has turned out, it would also be nice if they ended up | ||||
|   delivering construction machines (excavators, etc.) to the village so they | ||||
|   don't need to rely on water shipments past the day when the | ||||
|   protagonists leave for Nova Metropolis. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
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| <!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> <Emily First Contact> </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body> | ||||
| 
 | ||||
| <h1> <Emily First Contact></h1> | ||||
| <p class="comment"> | ||||
|   Outline: | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <ul> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     Emily walks to the main control center | ||||
|     <ul> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         it has also been used as a general hang-out spot bc it has a rather | ||||
|         nice view of the biotope and the sky | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|     </ul> | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     Emily and Lena sit down at a desk with a view of the biotope and have | ||||
|     a meal | ||||
|     <ul> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         the meal gets interrupted by the equipment in the control center | ||||
|         coming to life (fans coming on, some control panels lighting up, | ||||
|         boot-up/status/ready beeps) | ||||
|         <ul> | ||||
|           <li class="comment"> | ||||
|             a status light on the wall, that Emily had never seen on, | ||||
|             lights up (could be something like "LINK") | ||||
|           </lI> | ||||
|           <li class="comment"> | ||||
|             short dialog, could be something like this: "That's | ||||
|             them." "Earth people?" Lena nods and gets up. | ||||
|           </li> | ||||
|         </ul> | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|     </ul> | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     Lena tells Emily to follow | ||||
|     <ul> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         They walk over to a control panel with an embedded terminal | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         Communication with Earth ensues | ||||
|         <ul> | ||||
|           <li class="comment"> | ||||
|             bittersweet dialog | ||||
|             <ul> | ||||
|               <li class="comment"> | ||||
|                 Emily is conscious again | ||||
|               </li> | ||||
|               <li class="comment"> | ||||
|                 Lena is going to die | ||||
|               </li> | ||||
|               <li class="comment"> | ||||
|                 They talk about what will become of Emily | ||||
|                 <ul> | ||||
|                   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|                     Emily doesn't (yet) want to leave the moon - | ||||
|                     she's afraid of leaving her entire world behind | ||||
|                   </li> | ||||
|                   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|                     The decision is made that whatever preparations can be | ||||
|                     done, should be done, just in case | ||||
|                   </li> | ||||
|                 </ul> | ||||
|               </li> | ||||
|             </ul> | ||||
|           </li> | ||||
|         </ul> | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|     </ul> | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
| </ul> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   <span class="comment">note: need to check mice eating behavior when fed, | ||||
|   might want to add a section where she actually handles and feeds them | ||||
|   </span><br /> | ||||
|   Emily closes the cage and puts the <whatever they feed the mice> | ||||
|   back into the cupboard. She <span class="comment">does something related | ||||
|   to taking care of the mice</span>, steps out into the hallway, and | ||||
|   starts walking. The entire habitat is eerily quiet. Apart from her steps, | ||||
|   just the hum of the electrical systems and the quiet whirr of the air | ||||
|   circulation are audible. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   3 – 5 – 2 – 1 – Enter. The keypad beeps with | ||||
|   every button press. A computer voice announces | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Access authorized</span>. The door to the main | ||||
|   control center module slides up and she steps through. The module | ||||
|   contains one large room with rows of integrated computer equipment desks | ||||
|   arranged <span class="comment">need a fitting description of what a | ||||
|   mission control rom looks like</span>. The wall to the left that most of | ||||
|   the seats are facing is completely taken up by a panorama window into | ||||
|   the biosphere, an even larger module with a ceiling of glass and support | ||||
|   beams completely taken up by plant life, trees, small animals, and a big | ||||
|   pond. The wall to the right holds a large status panel with some | ||||
|   seven-segment displays for information and lots of big status indicator | ||||
|   symbols. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Emily walks down the shallow stairs towards the panorama window. In | ||||
|   front of the window are tables and chairs that were moved there recently | ||||
|   as the room had become more of a general hangout spot for the remaining | ||||
|   people when they were still around. Lena sits at one of them, | ||||
|   <span class="comment">preparing something</span> while waiting for her. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p class="comment"> | ||||
|   missing dialog about food and starting to eat | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   They get interrupted by all of the equipment in the room suddenly coming | ||||
|   alive. All of the computer desks that weren't perviously active | ||||
|   turn on. Some of the status indicators on the back wall start blinking. | ||||
|   A large, green triangle with the letters LINK next to it flickers and | ||||
|   then lights up. Emily looks at it in confusion.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">What does that light mean?</span> She gestures | ||||
|   towards it.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">That's them.</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Earth people?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Yes</span>, Lena replies while quickly finishing | ||||
|   her meal, <span class="speech">they said they'd try to get a phone | ||||
|   connection going.</span><br /> | ||||
|   As if on cue, the phone on the large center console begins to ring. Lena | ||||
|   gets up and walks over, Emily follows her. <span class="comment">note: | ||||
|   might need to imply that Lena is very sick</span> Lena sits down in | ||||
|   front of it, picks up the receiver, and presses a few buttons. | ||||
|   The speaker on the console starts crackling and hissing. Through the | ||||
|   noise, they hear a faint voice. Lena leans over to a microphone and | ||||
|   talks into it:<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">We can't hear you, one moment.</span><br /> | ||||
|   She flips some switches on the console. The speaker cracles some more, | ||||
|   then a loud pop, then silence. The smell of magic smoke is in the air. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Lena turns to a terminal and starts typing.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="comment">note to self: missing establishing connection<br /> | ||||
|   note to self: add some data corruption</span> | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <pre class="terminal"> | ||||
| MOON-01 > This hasn't been maintained in forever. I think the | ||||
|           phone just went. | ||||
| EARTH-53> You may wanna check the modules under P2 for burnt components. | ||||
| MOON-01 > I know. | ||||
| MOON-01 > We have another problem somewhere along the line. There's | ||||
|           apparently more noise than signal. | ||||
| </pre> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Lena opens a cover with a small label "P2" and pulls two cards | ||||
|   out of their sockets and inspects them. One has a big black burn mark | ||||
|   right in the center.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Emily, can you fetch me this module from another | ||||
|   phone?</span> | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">And?</span> Michelle asks Jack as he looks up from | ||||
|   the terminal.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Weak signal - and they need to fix their | ||||
|   phone.</span><br /> | ||||
|   James asks <span class="speech">What about that plan B of increasing the | ||||
|   transmit power?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Meh.</span> Jack doesn't seem too enthusiastic | ||||
|   about it.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="comment">TODO: Dialog. They decide not to increase the | ||||
|   power before double-checking that everything is aligned properly. Sure | ||||
|   enough, they're off by a bit.<br /> | ||||
|   Request for comment: Does this make the story more interesting or is it | ||||
|   confusing? I originally didn't want to do perspective changes | ||||
|   within chapters, and I still might not, but this was too good of an idea | ||||
|   not to write it down.</span> | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p class="comment"> | ||||
|   note to self: After fixing the alignment, pick up on the moon and | ||||
|   continue. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
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| 
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| <h1> Alone</h1> | ||||
| <p class="comment"> | ||||
|   Outline: | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <ul> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     Lena and Emily put on their space suits to go outside  | ||||
|     <ul> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         (imply that Lena is about to die) | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         Lena double-checks that Emily can get back inside | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         Emily helps Lena with her helmet | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         something to the effet of Lena is leaving for one final time | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|     </ul> | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     they go to the grave of Lena's SO | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     once there, they sit down on the ground | ||||
|     <ul> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         Emily helps Lena take her life support unit off her back | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         Lena sits down leaning against a rock, her life support unit next | ||||
|         to her | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         "You were ultimately right" conversation  | ||||
|         <ul> | ||||
|           <li class="comment"> | ||||
|             Lena has to tell Emily that she should get in touch with Jack | ||||
|             using the downlink | ||||
|           </li> | ||||
|         </ul> | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|     </ul> | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     Emily leaves and returns with new oxygen canisters | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     Lena dies | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     Emily returns inside and goes to the control center | ||||
|     <ul> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         following any procedures such as operating the air lock as | ||||
|         robot-like as possible | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         she lies down on the floor and looks out the window in the ceiling | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|       <li class="comment"> | ||||
|         she remains on the floor for an absurd amount of time | ||||
|       </li> | ||||
|     </ul> | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     Jack uses the uplink to dial into the station | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
| </ul> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Emily and Lena start putting on their space suits. Emily is done | ||||
|   relatively quickly while Lena makes slow progress as she struggles to | ||||
|   keep her balance. Half-way through, she gives up, sitting down on the | ||||
|   bench across from the air lock. Emily helps her all the way into the | ||||
|   suit. Lena sits there for a moment, heavily breathing, while Emily waits. | ||||
|   <br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Sorry, I can't... I feel exhausted.</span> | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Emily takes their helmets and brings them into the airlock. She returns | ||||
|   for a life support unit, pulls it out of the rack in the wall, and sets | ||||
|   it down on the floor. Following a mental checklist, she makes sure that | ||||
|   the air tank is connected properly and the status display reads what it | ||||
|   should. Everything okay... or is it? She double-checks with the check | ||||
|   list on the wall. Yes, this unit is ready. She triple-checks everything | ||||
|   – first time it actually matters. Reasonably satisfied with her | ||||
|   findings, she carries it over to the air lock. Then, she repeats this | ||||
|   procedure for the second unit. Finally, she helps Lena up and they get | ||||
|   into the airlock. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   The pumps are getting quieter and quieter. Lena kneels on the floor | ||||
|   holding a bunch of flowers from the biotope module, her life support | ||||
|   unit next to her on a short tether. Emily puts it on her back and and | ||||
|   helps her up. The outer door of the airlock swings aside and they start | ||||
|   walking, Lena leaning on Emily. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   They reach the graveyard and walk over to the recent graves. The entire | ||||
|   graveyard is covered in hills where the bodies of the deceased were | ||||
|   buried. Some have signs with names, some have painted pieces of regalith | ||||
|   as gravestones, some have <span class="comment"><the crumpled remains | ||||
|   of>? What happens to flowers when exposed to vacuum for a prolonged | ||||
|   amount of time?</span> flowers next to them, some are entirely | ||||
|   undecorated. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Lena places a couple flowers on each of the most recent graves, then she | ||||
|   gestures for Emily to take the life support unit off her back. Emily | ||||
|   takes it off and she sits down. Emily places the life support unit | ||||
|   behind her, Lena leans against it. She turns her radio on and Emily does | ||||
|   the same.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">Ultimately, you were right.</span> She is | ||||
|   interrupted by coughing. <span class="speech">If more had taken | ||||
|   Tony's cure – no matter what risk it posed ... – maybe | ||||
|   some of them would be alive now.</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">What about you?</span> Emily asks with a slither of | ||||
|   hope in her voice.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">No – no cure can save me, it's too | ||||
|   late.</span><br /> | ||||
|   Emily tears up. <span class="comment">note: Slightly. Is there a better | ||||
|   way to say this?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">I'm sorry.</span><br /> | ||||
|   Lena raises her arm. Emily sits down next to her and Lena puts it around | ||||
|   her shoulders.<br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">What will I do without you?</span><br /> | ||||
|   <span class="speech">You have a strong mind. You got this. Jack will | ||||
|   call in the evening, as usual; he will know what to do next.</span><br /> | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p class="comment"> | ||||
|   missing: | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <ul> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     Emily starting to reconsider her choice not to leave the moon | ||||
|   </lI> | ||||
|   <li class="comment"> | ||||
|     brief mention that the conversation changes to a more pleasant topic | ||||
|     and continues for a while | ||||
|   </li> | ||||
| </ul> | ||||
| <p> | ||||
|   Lena's low oxygen alarm starts to beep. Emily gets up and walks | ||||
|   back to the habitat. She enters through the airlock and looks for a | ||||
|   full oxygen bottle. She lifts one out of its rack and carries it back | ||||
|   to Lena. She opens the life support unit and closes the valves on it | ||||
|   and the empty bottle, then she replaces it and opens the valves again. | ||||
|   <br /><span class="comment"> | ||||
|   missing: Emily's LSU is also empty. She replaces the oxygen bottle | ||||
|   and returns, sitting down next to Lena for company.</span> | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p class="comment"> | ||||
|   missing: time jump, Lena dies, etc. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
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