From 336cee36b7b20909d2800de34d0a5dfe91a882a6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Thu, 11 Jan 2024 18:44:15 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] 03 A Simple Errand: minor revision

---
 03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html | 21 ++++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html b/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html
index 54e482f..5e277df 100644
--- a/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html
+++ b/03-A_Simple_Errand-Annie_library.html
@@ -19,13 +19,15 @@
 <p>
   Annie walks down the stairs and steps onto the square. It is brightly
   illuminated by a large glowing sphere made of yellow and brown glass
-  tiles, suspended on steel cables that hang from four office complexes
-  towering over the rest of the buildings. <span class="comment">Add a more
-  detailed description of the general area.</span> To the right is the
-  library, a large building with a facade of sandstone blocks. The front
-  features large pillars and a staircase spanning the entire width of the
-  building giving it the look of an ancient temple. The wall behind the
-  pillars has multiple rows of windows.
+  tiles, suspended on steel cables hanging from four office complexes
+  that tower over the rest of the buildings. The other buildings around the
+  square are more in line with the rest of the city but they each have a
+  very unique look. <span class="comment">Add a description of some
+  buildings</span> To the right is the library, a large building with a
+  facade of sandstone blocks. The front features large pillars and a
+  staircase spanning the entire width of the building giving it the look
+  of an ancient temple. The wall behind the pillars has multiple rows of
+  windows.
 </p>
 <p>
   Annie makes her way up the stairs and enters through the large wooden
@@ -63,8 +65,9 @@
   falls shut. Quickly, she walks back to the station. A train is coming.
   She hurries up the stairs and gets on. The doors close and it begins to
   move. Annie catches her breath and takes her library card out to look at
-  it. The note written on it reads: &quot;Meet me at 10:30PM tonight,
-  &lt;metro station&gt;&quot;.
+  it. The note written on it reads:
+  <span class="quote non-speech">&lt;metro station&gt; 10:30PM
+  tonight</span>.
 </p>
 
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