diff --git a/zd--Nova_Metropolis.html b/zd--Nova_Metropolis.html index bc4f603..3b1ae0c 100644 --- a/zd--Nova_Metropolis.html +++ b/zd--Nova_Metropolis.html @@ -68,15 +68,15 @@ Good night.
- missing section + missing section (and maybe a missing chapter of Jack getting the radio)
Jack is gone, Annie notices while
entering the bus. She goes to the kitchen area.
There's a note on the table: "Will
be back at 6:30"
- Michelle looks at her watch.
- It is 6:30.
+ Michelle looks at her watch. It is
+ 6:30.
I guess there's nothing to do but wait.
He'll show up soon enough. James chimes in.
They place their bags full of found goodies on the floor and sit down
@@ -84,12 +84,24 @@
After a while, they hear a fast car approaching. Looking outside, they
- see an oldtimer <zoom> by. A moment later, it returns, braking so
- hard that it leaves tire marks on the road. Jack gets out and waves at
- them. He turns off the engine and walks to the front of the bus. Annie
- opens the door.
+ see an oldtimer zoom by. Michelle says:
+ That's him. A moment later, the
+ car returns, braking so hard it leaves tire marks on the road. Jack gets
+ out and waves at them. He turns off the engine and walks to the front of
+ the bus. Annie opens the door.
Where have you been?
- Jack has misremembered where they parked the bus so
- he was searching for them.
+ I went on my own little adventure and may or
+ may not have forgotten where the bus was parked.
+ Didn't you go to sleep?
+ Well yeah... And then I had a dream that
+ inspired me to go looking for a radio. He points to the car he
+ arrived in. It's in the trunk.
+ said dream is him running a radio station talking
+ to Emily
+ Michelle facepalms. Annie and James look at both of them in confusion.
+ Is it one of these radios? Michelle
+ makes a gesture like turning a dial.
+ Yes, it is. Make this clear when Jack picks it
+ up.
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