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 <p>
   The phone rings a few more times but stops before she can make it there.
   She realizes how thirsty she is and takes a detour to the nearest kitchen.
-  She thinks <span class="quote speech">Water! Yes!</span> but her
+  She thinks <span class="quote non-speech">Water! Yes!</span> but her
   excitement quickly turns into disgust as a brown liquid full of clumps
-  <span class="comment">sprudelt?</span> from the tap.
+  <span class="comment">sprudelt?</span> from the tap. The detour gets
+  bigger.
 </p>
 <p>
   After getting water from Tony&apos;s lab and feeding the mice &ndash;
-  which she had also neglected to do &ndash; she goes into the main
-  control room. The terminal for communication with Earth is lit up,
-  showing a message. Emily sits down and writes in response:<br />
-  <span class="quote non-speech">Lena is dead.</span>
+  which she had neglected to do &ndash; she goes into the main control
+  room. The terminal for communication with Earth is lit up,
+  showing a message. Emily sits down and, before even reading it, starts
+  typing.
 </p>
+<pre class="terminal">
+<span class="blur">MICHELLE @ EARTH-53 <b>></b> A message Emily doesn&apos;t register and won&apos;t remember.</span>
+LENA @ MOON-01 <b>></b> Lena is dead.
+MICHELLE @ EARTH-53 <b>></b> I am so sorry.
+MICHELLE @ EARTH-53 <b>></b> My condolences.
+MICHELLE @ EARTH-53 <b>></b> Are you ok to talk? Or do you need some time?
+<span class="comment">TODO: change above message</span>
+</pre>
 
 <p class="comment">
-  She gets up and realizes that she had been completely neglecting her
-  bodily needs (food, water, ...) and that her back hurts.
-
-  She starts makeing her way to the main control center, part-way there the
-  phone stops ringing. She goes to the nearest bathroom, goes to one of the
-  kitchens to grab the next vegetable she can find, and heads to the control
-  center to log on at a terminal.
+  Emily is hungry asf at this point
 </p>
 
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