From 3ff9e3e4e96602c0fac97bdc2ad68db95b183e07 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BodgeMaster <> Date: Sun, 20 Jul 2025 21:03:57 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] 'vb' : continue writing Well, that overstates it a bit. I got side-tracked building a fancy blur effect --- vb--Emily_incoming_call.html | 29 ++++++++++++++++------------- 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/vb--Emily_incoming_call.html b/vb--Emily_incoming_call.html index 4fd1b6a..74c7410 100644 --- a/vb--Emily_incoming_call.html +++ b/vb--Emily_incoming_call.html @@ -43,26 +43,29 @@

The phone rings a few more times but stops before she can make it there. She realizes how thirsty she is and takes a detour to the nearest kitchen. - She thinks Water! Yes! but her + She thinks Water! Yes! but her excitement quickly turns into disgust as a brown liquid full of clumps - sprudelt? from the tap. + sprudelt? from the tap. The detour gets + bigger.

After getting water from Tony's lab and feeding the mice – - which she had also neglected to do – she goes into the main - control room. The terminal for communication with Earth is lit up, - showing a message. Emily sits down and writes in response:
- Lena is dead. + which she had neglected to do – she goes into the main control + room. The terminal for communication with Earth is lit up, + showing a message. Emily sits down and, before even reading it, starts + typing.

+
+MICHELLE @ EARTH-53 > A message Emily doesn't register and won't remember.
+LENA @ MOON-01 > Lena is dead.
+MICHELLE @ EARTH-53 > I am so sorry.
+MICHELLE @ EARTH-53 > My condolences.
+MICHELLE @ EARTH-53 > Are you ok to talk? Or do you need some time?
+TODO: change above message
+

- She gets up and realizes that she had been completely neglecting her - bodily needs (food, water, ...) and that her back hurts. - - She starts makeing her way to the main control center, part-way there the - phone stops ringing. She goes to the nearest bathroom, goes to one of the - kitchens to grab the next vegetable she can find, and heads to the control - center to log on at a terminal. + Emily is hungry asf at this point

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