diff --git a/na-Telescope.html b/na-Telescope.html index f275e48..6227bdf 100644 --- a/na-Telescope.html +++ b/na-Telescope.html @@ -2,13 +2,15 @@
+ Jack grabs the map from the center console.
Michelle says: I know the way.
Wanna drive?
Sure.
- Jack hands her the keys and the four get in the truck. James joins
- Michelle in the front, Annie and Jack take the rear seats.
- A few moments later, Michelle pulls onto the street in front of
- the bunker.
+ He puts the map back, hands her the keys, and the four get in the truck.
+ James joins Michelle in the front and has Dora jump in
+ translate: in seinen Fußraum, Annie
+ and Jack take the rear seats. A few moments later, Michelle pulls onto
+ the street in front of the bunker.
James asks her: How far is it?
A decent bit. Used to be about an hour on the
highway. If it's in even somewhat decent shape, I'd say
@@ -27,16 +29,17 @@
you.
How are you not absolutely terrified by the
speed?
- You get used to it after a while... Also,
- I know very well what I can or can't do with this car –
- I used to drive the same back then.
+ You get used to it... Also, I know very well
+ what I can or can't do with this car – I used to drive the
+ same back then.
+ Maybe add a section about Dora acting up?
Within a few minutes, they make it out of Ivydale, leaving its valley behind. The mountains make way for an area of plains and shallow hills. The large, rusty signs above still indicate the proximity of Sentinel Shores where they haven't faded completely. Following - them, Michelle takes an exit onto another highway that takes them north, + them, Michelle takes an exit onto another highway that leads north, around the western part of Ivydale's lower side.
@@ -58,25 +61,27 @@
James, I'm sorry, but it doesn't
look like you'll be able to look through that telescope – or
anyone for that matter...
- Aww, what a let-down. Might still find
+ Aww, what a let-down. Still gonna look for
pictures there... Didn't you say you also need a telescope?
There are two telescopes here: The optical one
back there and the radio telescope in that ball of triangles in the
middle there. That's essentially just a really big antenna.
- How does that work?
- Stars emit light, but also other kinds of
- radiation. Radio telescopes were used to image that.
- Can we do that?
+ An antenna but you call it a telescope?
+
+ It works similarly, just for imaging a much
+ lower part of the electromagnetic spectrum. Stars give off a bunch more
+ than just visible light.
+ Can we try that one?
A lot of things would have to go right for
that.
She drives through what remains of an open gate, onto a large,
- overgrown paved area inbetween the buildings. She drives around
- the radio telescope and parks the truck between it and the optical
- telescope. They get out and look around. Trees and bushes grow all over
+ overgrown paved area inbetween the buildings, going around
+ the radio telescope and parking the truck between it and the optical
+ one. They get out and look around. Trees and bushes grow all over
the place, some even out of the buildings' walls. Dora runs up
to one of the bushes and barks at it. A young fox jumps out and runs
away.
@@ -91,10 +96,11 @@
The ones in the front depicting the outside of the observatory but
there is at least one depicting a nebula.
James, look what I found.
- He puts it into his backpack.
+ Oooh thanks!
+ He takes it and puts it into a bag.
- Meanwhile, Jack has found a way upstairs. The stairs are partially
+ Meanwhile, Jack has found a way upstairs. The staircase has partially
collapsed so he moves one of the filing cabinets in their place and
climbs to the next floor.