'qa' Overdue Maintenance: continue writing and revise what was there

qa-Overdue_Maintenence-power_station.html

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   Roaring water echoes from somewhere deep below. Annie grabs her bag and
   goes ahead. The tunnel wall to the right features doors, large gates,
   and windows that allow a peek into abandoned offices, storage spaces, and
-  control rooms. The end of the tunnel connects to a balcony with walkways
+  control rooms. The end of the tunnel connects to a balcony with rusty
-  connecting to either side, extending into a narrow ravine. She steps onto
+  walkways connecting to either side, extending into a narrow ravine.
-  it, making sure to keep her distance to the railing, and looks around.
+  She steps onto it, making sure to keep her distance to the railing, and
-  The walkway to the right connects to the top of a dam blocking the ravine.
+  looks around. The walkway to the right connects to the top of a dam
-  A couple bushes, purple flowers, and a small tree grow on top of it and
+  blocking the ravine. A couple bushes, purple flowers, and a small tree
-  the wall is partially green from moss. Water flows over the spillway,
+  grow on top of it and the wall is partially green from moss. Water flows
-  falling into the depths below where it joins a torrent of water coming
+  over the spillway, falling into the depths below where it joins a torrent
-  from two big pipes at the bottom of the dam.
+  of water coming from two big pipes at the bottom of the ravine.
 </p>
 <p>
-  She turns around to see Jack getting a toolbox from the truck bed
+  She turns around to see Jack getting a toolbox from the truck bed and
-  <span class="comment">one word or two?</span> and James and Michelle
+  James and Michelle waiting next to a door, holding a large box full of
-  waiting next to a door, holding a large box full of random spare parts.
+  random spare parts. She hurries over to them and opens it by pulling a
-  She hurries over to them and opens it by pulling a loop of wire through
+  loop of wire through the latch.
-  the latch.
 </p>
 <p>
   Inside is the main control room. The wall to the right is lined with
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   1991 with a few entries and crossed-off days.
 </p>
 <p>
-  Jack notices that Annie has unwittingly stepped onto the glass pane.
+  Jack looks at a clipboard that was placed on the control panel on the
-  
+  center console.<br />
+  <span class="quote speech">The next maintenence expedition is scheduled
+  for 2011 &ndash; I don&apos;t think anyone ever stepped foot in here
+  after &lt;dome city&gt; was closed off.</span><br />
+  <span class="quote speech">It wouldn&apos;t surprise me.</span> Annie
+  leans against the center console. <span class="quote speech">Apart from a
+  small group, the entire city is legitimately scared of the outside
+  world.</span><br />
+  <span class="quote speech">I mean they&apos;re probably right, the
+  outside world is dangerous. Look down, by the way.</span><br />
+  <span class="quote speech">Whoa!</span><br />
+  She stumbles backwards. Without noticing it, she had walked onto the
+  glass pane. It allows a view down into a hall filled with machinery.
+</p>
+<p>
+  They look down into it. Water is pouring out of a burst pipe and from
+  the flanges between pipes.<br />
+  <span class="quote speech">It&apos;s a miracle this place is still
+  running.</span>
+</p>
+<p class="comment">
+  missing section
+</p>
+<p>
+  Jack walks up to the rusty railing, grabbing it and trying to shake it
+  as hard as he can but it doesn&apos;t even rattle.<br />
+  <span class="quote speech">Quality engineering.</span><br />
+  Using the walkway to the right, they get on top of the dam.
+  <span class="comment">And now what?</span>
+</p>
+<p>
+  The other walkway connects to a freestanding staircase leading all the
+  way down.
+</p>
+<p>
+  Jack turns the key and the gate starts to move up, scrathcing and
+  squeeking as it does, revealing a bunch of crates. About half-way
+  up, it gets stuck, making a buzzing noise. Jack lets go of the key, it
+  stops. They duck under the gate and look around. They find themselves in
+  a warehouse much larger than the gate and windows facing the tunnel would
+  lead to assume.<br />
+  <span class="quote speech">Now that, ladies and gentlemen, is what I call
+  an adequate stockpile of spare parts.</span><br />
+  Jack walks up to a huge crate and wipes the dust off the label:
+  <span class="quote non-speech">Turbine C, replacement 2</span>.
+</p>
+<p class="comment">
+  exploring the warehouse, they find a forklift and a railroad in the back
 </p>
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