'qa' Overdue Maintenance: continue writing and revise what was there
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Roaring water echoes from somewhere deep below. Annie grabs her bag and
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goes ahead. The tunnel wall to the right features doors, large gates,
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and windows that allow a peek into abandoned offices, storage spaces, and
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control rooms. The end of the tunnel connects to a balcony with walkways
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connecting to either side, extending into a narrow ravine. She steps onto
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it, making sure to keep her distance to the railing, and looks around.
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The walkway to the right connects to the top of a dam blocking the ravine.
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A couple bushes, purple flowers, and a small tree grow on top of it and
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the wall is partially green from moss. Water flows over the spillway,
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falling into the depths below where it joins a torrent of water coming
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from two big pipes at the bottom of the dam.
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control rooms. The end of the tunnel connects to a balcony with rusty
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walkways connecting to either side, extending into a narrow ravine.
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She steps onto it, making sure to keep her distance to the railing, and
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looks around. The walkway to the right connects to the top of a dam
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blocking the ravine. A couple bushes, purple flowers, and a small tree
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grow on top of it and the wall is partially green from moss. Water flows
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over the spillway, falling into the depths below where it joins a torrent
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of water coming from two big pipes at the bottom of the ravine.
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<p>
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She turns around to see Jack getting a toolbox from the truck bed
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<span class="comment">one word or two?</span> and James and Michelle
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waiting next to a door, holding a large box full of random spare parts.
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She hurries over to them and opens it by pulling a loop of wire through
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the latch.
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She turns around to see Jack getting a toolbox from the truck bed and
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James and Michelle waiting next to a door, holding a large box full of
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random spare parts. She hurries over to them and opens it by pulling a
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loop of wire through the latch.
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</p>
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<p>
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Inside is the main control room. The wall to the right is lined with
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1991 with a few entries and crossed-off days.
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</p>
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<p>
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Jack notices that Annie has unwittingly stepped onto the glass pane.
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Jack looks at a clipboard that was placed on the control panel on the
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center console.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">The next maintenence expedition is scheduled
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for 2011 – I don't think anyone ever stepped foot in here
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after <dome city> was closed off.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">It wouldn't surprise me.</span> Annie
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leans against the center console. <span class="quote speech">Apart from a
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small group, the entire city is legitimately scared of the outside
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world.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">I mean they're probably right, the
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outside world is dangerous. Look down, by the way.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Whoa!</span><br />
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She stumbles backwards. Without noticing it, she had walked onto the
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glass pane. It allows a view down into a hall filled with machinery.
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</p>
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<p>
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They look down into it. Water is pouring out of a burst pipe and from
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the flanges between pipes.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">It's a miracle this place is still
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running.</span>
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</p>
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<p class="comment">
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missing section
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</p>
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<p>
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Jack walks up to the rusty railing, grabbing it and trying to shake it
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as hard as he can but it doesn't even rattle.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Quality engineering.</span><br />
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Using the walkway to the right, they get on top of the dam.
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<span class="comment">And now what?</span>
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</p>
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<p>
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The other walkway connects to a freestanding staircase leading all the
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way down.
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</p>
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<p>
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Jack turns the key and the gate starts to move up, scrathcing and
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squeeking as it does, revealing a bunch of crates. About half-way
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up, it gets stuck, making a buzzing noise. Jack lets go of the key, it
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stops. They duck under the gate and look around. They find themselves in
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a warehouse much larger than the gate and windows facing the tunnel would
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lead to assume.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Now that, ladies and gentlemen, is what I call
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an adequate stockpile of spare parts.</span><br />
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Jack walks up to a huge crate and wipes the dust off the label:
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<span class="quote non-speech">Turbine C, replacement 2</span>.
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</p>
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<p class="comment">
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exploring the warehouse, they find a forklift and a railroad in the back
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</p>
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