'va' Alone: minor revision
- air bottle → oxygen bottle - fixed the spelling of airlock (used to have 'air lock' in some places)master
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Emily and Lena start putting on their space suits. Emily is done
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relatively quickly while Lena makes slow progress as she struggles to
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keep her balance. Half-way through, she gives up, sitting down on the
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bench across from the air lock. Emily helps her all the way into the
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bench next to the airlock. Emily helps her all the way into the
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suit. Lena sits there for a moment, heavily breathing, while Emily waits.
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<span class="quote speech">Sorry, I can't... I feel exhausted.</span>
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Emily takes their helmets and brings them into the airlock. She returns
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for a life support unit, pulls it out of the rack in the wall, and sets
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it down on the floor. Following a mental checklist, she makes sure that
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the air bottle is connected properly and the gauges read what they
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the oxygen bottle is connected properly and the gauges read what they
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should. Everything okay... or is it? She double-checks with the check
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list on the wall. Yes, this unit is ready. She triple-checks everything
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– first time it actually matters. Reasonably satisfied with her
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<p>
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The conversation is interrupted by the beeping of Lena's low oxygen
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alarm going off. Emily gets up and walks back to the habitat. She enters
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through the airlock and looks for a full air bottle. She lifts one
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through the airlock and looks for a full oxygen bottle. She lifts one
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out of its rack and carries it back to Lena. She opens the life support
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unit and closes the valves on it and the empty bottle, then she replaces
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it and opens the valves again. Just as she is done with that, her own
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