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 <h1> &lt;End&gt;</h1>
-<p class="comment">
-  If you are just here to read, skip past the outline.
-</p>
-<p class="comment">
-  Outline of this section:
-</p>
-<ul>
-  <li class="comment">
-    protagonists are waiting on top of one of the sky scrapers in
-    Nova Metropolis
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    they&apos;re having food, potentially cooking it over a camp fire or
-    gas stove or whatever
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    Jack&apos;s watch starts to beep
-    <ul>
-      <li class="comment">
-        that&apos;s the alarm he set for roughly the time when moon girl
-        should be entering the atmosphere
-      </li>
-    </ul>
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    They get up and walk to the edge and start observing the sky with
-    binoculars
-    <ul>
-      <li class="comment">
-        after a while, the escape pod becomes visible as its heat
-        shield glows red hot
-      </li>
-    </ul>
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    several minutes pass (ChatGPT says a space shuttle would take about
-    half an hour so let&apos;s assume 10 to 15 min
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    the thing is coming down way too quickly
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    the rear end of the capsule breaks apart while it&apos;s (from their
-    perspective) still far up in the sky
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    the capsule plummets into the city leaving a crater where it lands and
-    taking down some buildings
-    <ul>
-      <li class="comment">
-        they think they just witnessed a horrible accident
-      </il>
-    </ul>
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    after a moment, a parachute opens in the distance
-    <ul>
-      <li class="comment">
-        it lands between the buildings
-      </li>
-    </ul>
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    In a hunch, one of the protagonists grabs a radio and broadcasts a
-    message asking if the girl is okay
-    <ul>
-      <li class="comment">
-        very noisy but clearly affirmative response
-      </li>
-    </ul>
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    End of story
-  </li>
-</ul>
 
 <p>
   The group sits around the pot with leftovers on the gas stove, enjoying
