From 6b45d241bd09afa079a1a8c5a3a3a6a81ed963bf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BodgeMaster <> Date: Wed, 2 Jul 2025 22:33:18 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] 01 Wake Up, 'zb' Pancakes: minor revision --- 01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html | 3 ++- zb-Pancakes-reaching_nova_metropolis.html | 8 ++++---- 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html b/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html index e6a7ba3..56daa29 100644 --- a/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html +++ b/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html @@ -19,7 +19,8 @@ different from yesterday - not yesterday! That was years ago, probably decades... Besides the point. It looks different. Not just things have moved around different, - it gives off the vibe of a full-on lost place. Unexpected but whatever... + it gives off the vibe of a full-on lost place. Unexpected, but he brushes + the thought aside for the moment...

The pressurized air hisses in the lines as the door of the preservation diff --git a/zb-Pancakes-reaching_nova_metropolis.html b/zb-Pancakes-reaching_nova_metropolis.html index daafa5f..c2ca9c9 100644 --- a/zb-Pancakes-reaching_nova_metropolis.html +++ b/zb-Pancakes-reaching_nova_metropolis.html @@ -14,10 +14,10 @@ the engine.

- Annie swings her legs out of bed to sit up straight. She stretches, - gets up, and walks shuffles? over to the - table. Jack puts a large plate with a pile of pancakes in the center and - grabs plates for everyone. He also places a few jars on the table: + Annie swings her legs out of bed and sits up. She stretches and yawns, + gets up, and shuffles over to the table. Jack puts a large plate with + a pile of pancakes in the center and grabs plates for everyone. + He also places a few jars on the table: Honey, Chocco TODO: Add an advert for Chocco somewhere earlier in the story. It's the in-universe equivalent of Nutella., and cinnamon with sugar Is that