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   <br />
   A medium-sized, brown dog runs out, barks and then runs back into the
   bushes. A moment later, it reappears, followed by a guy wearing a long,
-  dark green coat that has been patched a few times. He holds a long staff,
-  using it as a <span class="comment">Wanderstab? Cane?</span>.
+  dark green coat that has been patched a few times. He is wearing a
+  backpack and holds a long staff, using it as a
+  <span class="comment">Wanderstab? Cane?</span>.
 </p>
 <p>
   <span class="quote speech">Good evening!</span><br />