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<h1>The Floor Is Water</h1> <h1>The Floor Is Water</h1>
<p class="comment">missing section</p> <p>
Jack goes ahead, walking across to the staircase tower. He reaches the
first platform.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Clear.</span><br />
Michelle follows him as he starts walking downstairs. She reaches the
platform.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Clear.</span>
<br />
James follows them and also says <span class="quote speech">clear</span>
as he reaches the platform. Annie hesitates.<br />
Jack looks up to her from the next platform down and says:
<span class="quote speech">Come on Annie, you got this, it&apos;s gonna
hold.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">I&apos;m scared.</span><br />
James turns around and stomps on the walkway. It makes a dull ringing
sound and rust and debris rain down into the depths.<br />
He says: <span class="quote speech">Nah this thing&apos;s fiiiine.
You can come over.</span><br />
He goes back to the top of the tower and Annie cautiously walks
across.<br />
Jack continues downwards and the others follow, making sure to never
be on the same staircase with each other and passing warnings back:<br />
<span class="quote speech">Careful, missing steps here.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">James, missing steps.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Annie, missing steps.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Okay.</span>
</p>
<p>
The staircase tower stands on top of a large, slightly elevated concrete
platform roughly taking up a third of the ravine's width. One side is
connected to the rock face, the other side ends in a vertical edge that
goes down to where the outflow of the power plant flows past. A very
rusty railing <span class="comment">begrenzt</span> that side, though
it looks like it might fall apart if you look at it wrong.
The entire platform is flooded by water rushing out of a broken door in
the rock face. It spreads out over the platform, and flows off the edge.
<br />
Michelle says to Jack: <span class="quote speech">I don&apos;t think
we&apos;ll get in this way.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">Got another idea?</span><br />
They walk down the last staircase and onto the platform.<br />
<span class="quote speech">No, but you&apos;re gonna get swept
away.</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">We just need to get past the door, the water
inside will be moving a lot slower.</span><br />
Michelle and Annie decide to stay back, Jack and James approach the door
from the side. The two pick up a large rock and throw it right in
front of the door. It starts rolling immediately and, within seconds,
tumbles off the edge.<br />
Jack calls out to the girls:
<span class="quote speech">You were right.</span><br />
</p>
<p class="comment">this is in the middle of the chapter after they went
downstairs and tried to explore the turbine hall, back up in the tunnel
</p>
<p> <p>
Jack turns the key and the gate starts to move up, scrathcing and Jack turns the key and the gate starts to move up, scrathcing and
squeeking as it does, revealing a bunch of crates. About half-way squeeking as it does, revealing a bunch of crates. About half-way
up, it gets stuck, making a buzzing noise. He lets go of the key and it up, it gets stuck, making a buzzing noise. He lets go of the key and
stops. They duck under the gate and look around. They find themselves in the buzzing stops. They duck under the gate and find themselves in
a warehouse much larger than the gate and windows facing the tunnel would a warehouse much larger than the gate and windows in the tunnel
lead to assume.<br /> would lead to assume.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Now that, ladies and gentlemen, is what I call Jack says: <span class="quote speech">Now that, ladies and gentlemen,
an adequate stockpile of spare parts.</span><br /> is what I call an adequate stockpile of spare parts.</span><br />
Jack walks up to a huge crate and wipes the dust off the label: He walks up to a huge crate and wipes the dust off the label:
<span class="quote non-speech">Turbine C, replacement 2</span>. <span class="quote non-speech">Turbine C, replacement 2</span>.
</p> </p>
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