From 7645eceac0113eabdd66445122dda0be956d1460 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BodgeMaster <> Date: Sat, 7 Oct 2023 16:16:28 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] The third named moon inhabitant actually has a name now: Sasha --- notes/people_and_organizations.txt | 2 +- oa--Emily_lab_incident.html | 6 ++---- 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/notes/people_and_organizations.txt b/notes/people_and_organizations.txt index 453aa2a..0f08e9d 100644 --- a/notes/people_and_organizations.txt +++ b/notes/people_and_organizations.txt @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ People: - from moon base (duh) - Her spouse died just before Emily's intro - dies like everyone else on the moon except Emily - - unnamed male crew member + - Sasha - about to die in the lab incident chapter - Karl - Annie's Grandpa diff --git a/oa--Emily_lab_incident.html b/oa--Emily_lab_incident.html index 3074da1..269a2c0 100644 --- a/oa--Emily_lab_incident.html +++ b/oa--Emily_lab_incident.html @@ -66,12 +66,10 @@

Why not?
- Emily looks back and forth between Lena and the man on the bed. - needs rephrasing because he isn't a stranger -
+ Emily looks back and forth between Lena and Sasha.
Tony said he had some success with his mice, why shouldn't we try it?
- Tony also died after – he is + Tony also died after – Sasha is interrupted by coughing – after trying it on himself.
Not like anything else is gonna happen to