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@@ -15,8 +15,27 @@ Michelle grabs a radio and talks into it:
 "Jack, where are you? She's awake."
 They momentarily see the glint of a mirror being held into the sunlight from
 half-way up a sky scraper on the other side of the crater.
-"What are thy doing over there?"
+"What are they doing over there?"
 Annie shakes her head.
 "I forgot to turn my radio off yesterday. Cue Jack waking us up just before
 dawn - he heard people talking. They're taking the big radio up to that antenna
 over there."
+
+
+Idea for Emily's character if this turns out to be a story:
+She could take up tending to graveyards, both new and from the old world,
+as a hobby. Also as a way to reminisce and honor the ones she has lost.
+Also, she could draw images of what it used to be like on the moon and
+stash them in places to be found.
+
+
+Idea for where the story could go: Jack and James broadcast a call out to
+anyone who will hear it to meet up in Nova Metropolis. Initially, they will
+hide out in multiple sky scrapers around the designated meeting poingt to
+see if whoever turns up is a danger. Everyone who does turn up is the same
+kind of on edge but they manage to resolve it peacefully. For example
+by letting people into an interviewing room one by one and asking them to
+lay down their arms at the entrance. A small tribe and a few individuals
+later, known members (scouts) of a dangerous tribe show up. They hide,
+broadcast another message to tell everyone still on their way to flee,
+before GTFOing.