diff --git a/va-Alone-Lena_death.html b/va-Alone-Lena_death.html index 515ef39..f31ed0e 100644 --- a/va-Alone-Lena_death.html +++ b/va-Alone-Lena_death.html @@ -153,15 +153,30 @@ it and opens the valves again. Just as she is done with that, her own alarm goes off. Disappointed/annoyed reaction

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+ Emily sits down next to Lena again, but there is no conversation. +

Emily looks at Lena – she had closed her eyes. As if she knew Emily was looking she opens them, looking directly at her. Gripping? her hand as she speaks. some meaningful last words? Then she lets go and closes her eyes again. A couple minutes later, she stops breathing. - wording? + wording

- missing: Emily returns inside, lays down on the floor + Emily sits next to Lena for a while, completely out of it, her mind + being numb. +

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+ Her oxygen alarm goes off. Absentmindedly, she gets up and returns to + the habitat. She opens the air lock, enters, closes the outside, and + enters the inside. As she is putting away her suit, she realizes that + she had been following the procedures from muscle memory without even + thinking about them. She walks to the ??? + module and lays down on the floor staring into the sky. + This module has to be described at some point + before this. It has panorama windows to all sides and a glass ceiling. +