From 7fccce67ab696cb353788edf06e54bc7a063fcbc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Tue, 14 Nov 2023 08:55:02 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] 'va' Alone: continue writing

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 va-Alone-Lena_death.html | 19 +++++++++++++++++--
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diff --git a/va-Alone-Lena_death.html b/va-Alone-Lena_death.html
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@@ -153,15 +153,30 @@
   it and opens the valves again. Just as she is done with that, her own
   alarm goes off. <span class="comment">Disappointed/annoyed reaction</span>
 </p>
+<p class="comment">
+  Emily sits down next to Lena again, but there is no conversation.
+</p>
 <p>
   Emily looks at Lena &ndash; she had closed her eyes. As if she knew Emily
   was looking she opens them, looking directly at her.
   <span class="comment">Gripping?</span> her hand as she speaks.
   <span class="comment">some meaningful last words?</span> Then she lets go
   and closes her eyes again. A couple minutes later, she stops breathing.
-  <span class="comment">wording?</span>
+  <span class="comment">wording</span>
 </p>
 <p class="comment">
-  missing: Emily returns inside, lays down on the floor
+  Emily sits next to Lena for a while, completely out of it, her mind
+  being numb.
+</p>
+<p>
+  Her oxygen alarm goes off. Absentmindedly, she gets up and returns to
+  the habitat. She opens the air lock, enters, closes the outside, and
+  enters the inside. As she is putting away her suit, she realizes that
+  she had been following the procedures from muscle memory without even
+  thinking about them. She walks to the <span class="comment">???</span>
+  module and lays down on the floor staring into the sky.
+  <span class="comment">This module has to be described at some point
+  before this. It has panorama windows to all sides and a glass ceiling.
+  </span>
 </p>
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