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@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@
   wakes up. He has a terrible headache. While moving his hands up to hold
   his head, he realizes that his entire body hurts.
   <span class="quote speech">Owowowww... Ouch!</span><br />
-  An automated voice announces: <span class="quote speech">Emergency
+  An automated voice comes on: <span class="quote speech">Emergency
   defrost complete. Entering low power mode.</span><br />
-  Jack thinks: <span class="quote non-speech">Get it together, Jack!
+  He thinks: <span class="quote non-speech">Get it together, Jack!
   You knew this was gonna happen. You have trained for this. Where are the
   meds again? ...</span>
 </p>
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
   different from yesterday - not yesterday! That was years ago, probably
   decades... Besides the point. It looks different. Not just
   <span class="quote non-speech">things have moved around</span> different,
-  it has the vibe of a full-on lost place. Unexpected but whatever...
+  it gives off the vibe of a full-on lost place. Unexpected but whatever...
 </p>
 <p>
   The pressurized air hisses in the lines as the door of the preservation
@@ -63,14 +63,42 @@
   until I find a way out of here &mdash; should be fine...</span><br />
   He continues past the remaining empty chambers to the back of the bunker.
 </p>
-<p class="comment">
-  Jack notices the toolbox is missing.
-  Jack opens the drawers on the desks looking for tools. He also rummages
-  through the cabinets and drawers in the kitchen area.
-  After finding some object that he could use as a screwdriver, he returns
-  to the door, taking off the control panel. He realizes that he has no
-  idea what he's doing so he attempts (and fails) to get the manual from
-  the computer.
+<p>
+  Jack opens the cabinets under each of the desks while talking to himself:
+  <span class="quote speech">Where is that fucking toolbox?</span>
+  <span class="comment">Do we have an alternative expletive to use?</span>
+  Well, it isn&apos;t there. He continues with the kitchen area. Still
+  nothing. He enters the bathroom through a door next to the kitchen area.
+  Nope, not here either. <span class="quote speech">Welp, time to
+  improvise.</span>
+</p>
+<p>
+  He returns to the kitchen area and rummages through the drawers to find
+  anything useful. He grabs a fork. <span class="quote speech">Works as a
+  screwdriver, I guess...</span> He proceeds to jam the handle into a
+  screw on one of the kitchen cabinets to see if it will turn. It does
+  &ndash; barely. Using a slightly rusty knife sharpener
+  <span class="comment">Wetzstahl?</span> he begins the long and arduous
+  process of making the fork handle more suitable as a screwdriver,
+  grinding its end over it over and over and over. He does this for a long
+  time. Over and over and over. His fingers start to go sore and he stops
+  to inspect his work. <span class="quote speech">Meh, could work.</span>
+  He tests it on the kitchen cabinet again.
+</p>
+<p>
+  His newly gained screwdriver in hand, he walks back to the control panel
+  for the door and unscrews it. After a bit of fiddling, the panel lifts
+  off the wall, pulling cables out of the box behind it. Jack holds the
+  fork by the handle and bends the <span class="comment"> middle?
+  inner?</span> prongs out of the way and attempts to bridge the control
+  panel&apos;s switches using the outer prongs. Nothing happens.
+  <span class="quote speech">Of couse it wasn't gonna be that easy.</span>
+</p>
+<p>
+  He starts to dig into the wires, attempting to find the fault. After a
+  while, he realizes that the wiring is more complex than expected and he
+  has no idea what he&apos;s doing. <span class="quote speech">Let&apos;s
+  get the manual for this thing...</span>
 </p>
 <p>
   Jack returns to the desk with the terminal. He flips the switch on the