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-<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> I Like Trains </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="home"><a href="index.html">&#8962;</a></div>
+<!DOCTYPE html><html><head><title> Smells Like Train Spirit </title><link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="html_resources/style.css"></head><body><svg class="hidden_filter"><filter id="crunchy_blur" x="0" y="0"><feFlood x="4" y="4" height="2" width="2"/><feComposite width="6" height="6" in2="SourceGraphic"/><feTile result="a"/><feComposite in="SourceGraphic" in2="a" operator="in"/><feMorphology operator="dilate" radius="1.4"/><feGaussianBlur stdDeviation="2.2"></feGaussianBlur></filter></svg><div class="home"><a href="index.html">&#8962;</a></div>
 
-<h1>I Like Trains</h1>
+<h1>Smells Like Train Spirit</h1>
 <!-- perspective: Michelle -->
 <p>
   <span class="quote speech">Michelle! Guess what I found...</span><br />
@@ -53,8 +53,8 @@
   Jack picks up a section of metal pipe and passes it to her. Putting it
   over the wrench for additional leverage, she pushes against it until the
   bolt snaps with a bang.<br />
-  <span class="quote speech">That&apos;s certainly one of the ways to
-  unbolt this thing...</span> she says before moving on to the next one.
+  <span class="quote speech">Guess that&apos;s not going back on...</span>
+  she says as she moves on to the next one.
 </p>
 <p>
   One by one, she removes the other nuts. Some of them snap off, some
@@ -63,16 +63,16 @@
   the wrench against its side until it comes loose...<br />
   <span class="quote speech">There&apos;s a whole loada nothing in
   here.</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech"><i>Great.</i> I guess there are a bunch more
-  we can try.</span> <span class="comment">needs a better reaction, may
-  want to state disappointment explicitly</span><br />
+  <span class="quote speech">Woulda been too easy. Guess there are a bunch
+  more we can try...</span><br />
   She jumps back down onto the end of the car.<br />
   <span class="quote speech">Looks like we&apos;ll be climbing a bunch of
   tank cars today.</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Let&apos;s see about that... Mind giving me
-  the wrench for a moment?</span><br />
-  He jumps over the gap between cars and uses it to knock against the wall
-  of the next tank.<br />
+  <span class="quote speech">Mind giving that back for a moment?</span>
+  He gestures for the wrench. <span class="quote speech">I got an
+  idea.</span><br />
+  Wrench in hand, he jumps over the gap to the next car and knocks on the
+  tank.<br />
   <span class="quote speech">Sounds empty.</span>
 </p>
 <p>
@@ -80,14 +80,14 @@
   when Jack hits it with the wrench. Michelle climbs on top again.
   The nuts on this one come off more easily and it doesn&apos;t take
   long until she lifts the lid.<br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Jackpot!</span> She sniffs the smell coming
-  off the liquid inside. <span class="quote speech">Smells like
-  diesel.</span><br />
+  <span class="quote speech">Jackpot!</span> She catches a whiff of the
+  fumes coming from the liquid inside. <span class="quote speech">Smells
+  like diesel.</span><br />
   <span class="quote speech">Nice! Let&apos;s find a truck or something...
   Wait, stupid idea but I need to show you...</span><br />
   <span class="quote speech">Oh no, what are you up to again?</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Nothing in particular. Wanna follow me for
-  a sec?</span>
+  <span class="quote speech">Uhh... Nothing in particular... Wanna follow
+  me for a sec?</span>
 </p>
 <p>
   She jumps down and follows him back to the former doorway.
