From 90224f66677ffed1ea480d97d992cf3549f9140d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Tue, 1 Apr 2025 14:52:01 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] 'ja' Erosion: tiny revision

---
 ja-erosion-michelle_wakeup.html | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/ja-erosion-michelle_wakeup.html b/ja-erosion-michelle_wakeup.html
index 19e7bee..0489d9e 100644
--- a/ja-erosion-michelle_wakeup.html
+++ b/ja-erosion-michelle_wakeup.html
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
   sips, she sets it down, unsure whether it helps or makes it worse, and
   rests her head again.<br />
   <span class="quote speech">Just let me sit here for a while.</span><br />
-  He sits down next to her, about half a meter away.
+  He sits down a bit to the right, facing her.
 </p>
 <p>
   A few minutes later, she lifts up her head again:<br />
@@ -80,10 +80,10 @@
   potatoes. Want some?</span><br />
   <span class="quote speech">Now that you ask, I&apos;m slowly getting
   hungry. Did you make your usual spicy dip?</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Yup &mdash; well...</span><br />
+  <span class="quote speech">Yup.</span><br />
   He gets up and walks over to the kitchen area, grabs a small bowl filled
   with a dark red-ish paste, and sets it on the table.<br />
-  <span class="quote speech">I had to improvise a little because of
+  <span class="quote speech">I had to improvise a little due to
   a distinct lack of fresh ingredients but I think it still turned out
   pretty good.</span><br />
   <span class="quote speech">Oh wow, that looks almost kinda scary.</span>
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
   the same as fresh peppers. I had to add <i>a lot</i> to get even close
   to the usual spiciness.</span><br />
   He grabs the <span class="comment">Backblech?</span> with potatoes
-  and puts it back in the oven to re-heat them.
+  and puts it back in the oven to re-heat.
 </p>
 <p>
   After the meal, they go to the bunker entrance and Jack opens the door