From 91377e0ab456f899912beed7bec3b1f3d58254f0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BodgeMaster <> Date: Mon, 31 Mar 2025 20:57:00 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] 'ga', 'pk': minor revision --- km-ran_when_parked.html | 25 ++++++++++++------------- na-Telescope.html | 2 +- 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-) diff --git a/km-ran_when_parked.html b/km-ran_when_parked.html index c7fcd58..3adc5da 100644 --- a/km-ran_when_parked.html +++ b/km-ran_when_parked.html @@ -40,12 +40,13 @@ going with this so I'll just leave it in here, commented out. That was quick – nice job.
Jack walks over to the compartment holding the batteries, takes the cables off the terminals, and hooks them up to the generator he had - turned into a makeshift power supply. He starts it and climbs into - the train. Michelle follows him and they go to the driver's cabin. - Jack turns a key switch and part of the dashboard lights up. Then, he - pushes the engine start button. The engine begins to turn over. - While holding the button, Jack points to the fuel pressure gauge, - slightly raising his voice to talk over the engine:
+ turned into a makeshift power supply. He pulls the ripcord and it + fires right up, then he climbs into the train. Michelle follows him + and they go to the driver's cabin. Jack turns a key switch and + part of the dashboard lights up. Then, he pushes the engine start button. + The engine begins to turn over. While holding the button, Jack points + to the fuel pressure gauge, slightly raising his voice to talk over + the engine:
That's progress already.
The needle on the gauge slowly creeps to the right.
Too slow though, he adds after a @@ -56,9 +57,9 @@ going with this so I'll just leave it in here, commented out.

Michelle suggests they take a look at the fuel injection. Jack turns the key switch off again and they go to the middle of the railcar. - The floor panels above the engine bay are already missing, they had - removed them earlier to replace the bits of rotting hose in the fuel - line. Jack grabs the manual from one of the seats and starts flipping + The floor panels above the engine bay are missing, they had removed + them earlier to replace the bits of rotting hose in the fuel line. + Jack grabs the manual from one of the seats and starts flipping through the pages while Michelle jumps out and stops the generator. He begins to undo knowledge gap here: How does that work? What do you undo to fix a gunked-up fuel injection? @@ -79,9 +80,7 @@ going with this so I'll just leave it in here, commented out. looking at Michelle and the bucket. She looks up at him and says:
Barely a few drips. But there's pressure on the other side of the fuel filter.
- So we need a new one? -

-

+ I'm gonna look for a spare.
He walks over to the closest door and jumps out. Michelle begins undoing the clamps holding the fuel line to the filter while Jack starts searching all drawers and boxes in the vicinity for a @@ -132,7 +131,7 @@ going with this so I'll just leave it in here, commented out. It does, so he forces the lugs onto the battery terminals which now have pieces of wire stuck to them.
Michelle leans out of the window and says: - The gauge with the battery symbol just jumped + The gauge with the battery symbol just dropped to the red line.
If it's not past it, should be fine.
diff --git a/na-Telescope.html b/na-Telescope.html index 366871b..f275e48 100644 --- a/na-Telescope.html +++ b/na-Telescope.html @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@

- Plot hole: geodesic dome bad. + Plot hole: why geodesic dome? They start exploring in the optical telescope building - not wasting too much time there. Then, they go into the radome.