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* built around an oasis in a desert * built around an oasis in a desert
* not the kind of desert where sand gets piled up into dunes otherwise it would have gotten buried * not the kind of desert where sand gets piled up into dunes otherwise it would have gotten buried
* buildings in a lot better shape due to being in a desert * buildings in a lot better shape due to being in a desert
* Siren’s Edge (formerly Westport) * Siren’s Edge (formerly Westport)
* Just a location that is mentioned in passing * Just a location that is mentioned in passing
* Rogue Tides * Rogue Tides
* small town that has (used to have) a datacenter * small town that has (used to have) a datacenter
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* Moon habitat * Moon habitat
* built by Neotek Dynamics * built by Neotek Dynamics
* theoretically permanently habitable but not made to exist in isolation * theoretically permanently habitable but not made to exist in isolation
* home to several hundred people in its prime
**Train stations:** **Train stations:**

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**Big-picture story overview:** **Big-picture story overview:**
* Story begins on Tue, 2106-06-01 * Story begins on Tue, 2106-06-01
* Jack wakes up and contacts Annie, in the end he asks for a manual for the door * \[partial\] Jack wakes up and contacts Annie, in the end he asks for a manual for the door
* Annie goes to the library but doesn’t get the manual - instead she gets a mysterious invite * \[partial\] Annie goes to the library but doesn’t get the manual - instead she gets a mysterious invite
* Annie talks to Jack again at work * \[missing\] Annie talks to Jack again at work
* Annie figures out how to use a keyboard properly * Annie figures out how to use a keyboard properly
* Potentially written from Jack’s perspective as not much of interest happens on Annie’s side * Potentially written from Jack’s perspective as not much of interest happens on Annie’s side
* he could do something else as well, maybe working on improvising tools before or after talking to Annie * he could do something else as well, maybe working on improvising tools before or after talking to Annie
* Annie gets introduced to secret organization, learns that Karl is also part of it * \[partial\] Annie gets introduced to secret organization, learns that Karl is also part of it
* The librarian gives Annie the keys for the library and instructions on where to find the relevant computers * \[partial\] Lucas gives Annie the keys for the library and instructions on where to find the relevant computers
* for some reason he can’t go get the manual himself (needs to be at an important event or something) * for some reason he can’t go get the manual himself (needs to be at an important event or something)
* Karl doesn’t join bc he can’t run if things go south, but he does give her a list of useful UNIX commands and a run-down of how to get one of these computers started * Karl doesn’t join bc he can’t run if things go south, but he does give her a list of useful UNIX commands and a run-down of how to get one of these computers started
* They talk about Jack and why they would help him * They talk about Jack and why they would help him
* Annie gets the manual and drops it off at Karl’s place * \[partial\] Annie gets the manual and drops it off at Karl’s place
* she puts a note and the floppy disk into his mailbox * she puts a note and the floppy disk into his mailbox
* Next morning from Jack’s perspective * \[missing\] Next morning from Jack’s perspective
* incoming connection from Karl * incoming connection from Karl
* he says that Annie has procured a floppy disk with the manual * he says that Annie has procured a floppy disk with the manual
* it’s not readable / the file is just gibberish * it’s not readable / the file is just gibberish
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* home computers are several times slower due to hardware disadvantages but this can’t be the only reason * home computers are several times slower due to hardware disadvantages but this can’t be the only reason
* high resource overhead? maybe he would use vast amounts of RAM? * high resource overhead? maybe he would use vast amounts of RAM?
* Karl says he’ll get back to Jack * Karl says he’ll get back to Jack
* Next secret organization meetup * \[missing\] Next secret organization meetup
* Annie gives the keys back * Annie gives the keys back
* they come up with the idea of stealing a minicomputer from some company that someone has a link to * they come up with the idea of stealing a minicomputer from some company that someone has a link to
* also the idea comes up that they could ask Jack to get them out in return for them helping him to get out * also the idea comes up that they could ask Jack to get them out in return for them helping him to get out
* has to end with law enforcement arriving at the bar and Kate telling them to gtfo * has to end with law enforcement arriving at the bar for an unrelated reason and Kate telling them to gtfo
* *Something else has to happen here from the perspective of someone that isn’t Annie* * \[partial\] Emily intro
* *Possibly Emily’s intro?* * Emily wakes up, Lena is in her room crying
* Annie talks to Jack again from the terminal at work * introduces that ppl die from some disease on the moon
* breakfast
* funeral
* \[missing\] Annie talks to Jack again from the terminal at work
* she falls asleep * she falls asleep
* next day she gets found there, someone makes a remark like "Why the sudden career change?" * next day she gets found there, someone makes a remark like "Why the sudden career change?"
* Annie thinks about it for a moment before replying "Actually, brilliant idea..." and quitting * Annie thinks about it for a moment before replying "Actually, brilliant idea..." and quitting
* She leaves work and heads somewhere to meet up with secret organization members * She leaves work and heads somewhere to meet up with secret organization members
* secret organization does secret organization things... * \[missing\] secret organization does secret organization things...
* new location or still the bar? * new location or still the bar?
* who is there? * who is there?
* preparations for the heist * preparations for the heist
* they also need to come up with the plan that Jack will get Annie and leave the others down there to continue their work * they also need to come up with the plan that Jack will get Annie and leave the others down there to continue their work
* they want Jack and Annie to find a way to mess with the power supply while they work on the inside to influence ppl so that a power outage will actually end up getting the city opened * they want Jack and Annie to find a way to mess with the power supply while they work on the inside to influence ppl so that a power outage will actually end up getting the city opened
* maybe Jack will have a reason to only accept one person like still figuring out a reliable food source * maybe Jack will have a reason to only accept one person like still figuring out a reliable food source
* Jack finishes writing the program and sends it to Karl * \[missing\] Jack finishes writing the program and sends it to Karl
* the heist * \[missing\] the heist
* Annie, Isabelle, Lucas, and the inside contact go in and collect equipment and bring it to the front door * Annie, Isabelle, Lucas, and the inside contact go in and collect equipment and bring it to the front door
* Karl’s friend is waiting to load it into the back of his pickup truck * Karl’s friend is waiting to load it into the back of his pickup truck
* Karl is behind the wheel ready to take off * Karl is behind the wheel ready to take off
* once everything is loaded up, Karl’s friend gets into the truck and everyone disperses in different directions * once everything is loaded up, Karl’s friend gets into the truck and everyone disperses in different directions
* they almost get caught * they almost get caught
* Maybe Lucas and one other member of the secret organization stay behind to buy the others time and get arrested * Maybe Lucas and one other member of the secret organization stay behind to buy the others time and get arrested
* next morning, they set up the computer at Karl’s place * \[missing\] next morning, they set up the computer at Karl’s place
* something in the news about a stolen computer lol * something in the news about a stolen computer lol
* "Hmm I wonder who could that have been? We wouldn’t know where it is..." * "Hmm I wonder who could that have been? We wouldn’t know where it is..."
* they break the encryption of the floppy disk (takes like three days) * they break the encryption of the floppy disk (takes like three days)
* Jack gets the bunker door open and wakes up Michelle * *\[missing\] some moon scene*
* \[missing\] Jack gets the bunker door open and wakes up Michelle
* they establish a base * they establish a base
* Jack explores the Ivydale area * Jack explores the Ivydale area
* He finds a working metro train somewhere that only needs some mild fixing up * He finds a working metro train somewhere that only needs some mild fixing up
* This may or may not be unknown to Annie * This may or may not be unknown to Annie
* meanwhile, the secret organization works on getting the computer equipment back to its rightful owners * \[missing\] meanwhile, the secret organization works on getting the computer equipment back to its rightful owners
* they get caught and run/gtfo, leaving the computer at the front entrance * they get caught and run/gtfo, leaving the computer at the front entrance
* there will have to be another news segment, something like this: * there will have to be another news segment, something like this:
* "In a bizarre turn of events, members of a suspected terrorist group have returned the stolen computer to xyz corp. It had been stolen from their headquarters four days prior..." * "In a bizarre turn of events, members of a suspected terrorist group have returned the stolen computer to xyz corp. It had been stolen from their headquarters four days prior..."
* They coordinate to get Annie out of the city asap * They coordinate to get Annie out of the city asap
* The others stay behind to continue their work on getting the officials to allow opening the air locks * The others stay behind to continue their work on getting the officials to allow opening the air locks
* Annie escapes the dome city / Jack drives the train into it and gets her out * \[partial\] Annie escapes the dome city / Jack drives the train into it and gets her out
* Annie sees the outside world for the first time * Annie sees the outside world for the first time
* James the nomad shows up with his dog * \[missing\] James the nomad shows up with his dog
* only Michelle is there, Jack and Annie are still on their way * only Michelle is there, Jack and Annie are still on their way
* He is mildly obsessed with space after seeing all sorts of images taken with telescopes * He is mildly obsessed with space after seeing all sorts of images taken with telescopes
* on his way to Sentinel Shores because the observatory there is supposedly somewhat intact * on his way to Sentinel Shores because the observatory there is supposedly somewhat intact
* he wants to see if he can make a telescope work * he wants to see if he can make a telescope work
* Something happens that will convince him to stay at the bunker * Something happens that will convince him to stay at the bunker
* possibly the topic of the moon base gets discussed * possibly the topic of the moon base gets discussed
* Jack and Michelle will be working on getting in touch with the moon * \[missing\] Jack and Michelle will be working on getting in touch with the moon
* turns out their communications dish and equipment is far too gone to be repaired due to a river changing course or some other destructive event * turns out their communications dish and equipment is far too gone to be repaired due to a river changing course or some other destructive event
* James suggests they should check out the observatory in Sentinel Shores * James suggests they should check out the observatory in Sentinel Shores
* They go on a "day trip" to Sentinel Shores to take a look at the observatory * \[missing\] They go on a "day trip" to Sentinel Shores to take a look at the observatory
* looks good but missing any kind of computer equipment (looted after or removed before the apocalypse) * looks good but missing any kind of computer equipment (looted after or removed before the apocalypse)
* has an optical telescope and a dish * has an optical telescope and a dish
* when talking about the lack of computers, the nomad remembers that he saw a lot of computer stuff in Rogue Tides * when talking about the lack of computers, the nomad remembers that he saw a lot of computer stuff in Rogue Tides
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* *secret organization has to do things like putting up banners in high-profile locations and/or distribute a manifesto* * *secret organization has to do things like putting up banners in high-profile locations and/or distribute a manifesto*
* *power has to go out for a while - or completely until someone fixes the power plant (could be that something breaks while they start up the plant again)* * *power has to go out for a while - or completely until someone fixes the power plant (could be that something breaks while they start up the plant again)*
* *has to result in the dome city opening up* * *has to result in the dome city opening up*
* *IDEA: "The power will be going out on <date> for critical maintenance that you have neglected to do for a century. Shame on you for sticking your heads in the sand instead of facing the problems of the outside world."*
* *the protagonists move to Sentinel Shores* * *the protagonists move to Sentinel Shores*
* *Originally I was thinking they might move to a factory hall or hangar or maybe even one of the lower levels of a sky scraper but it might be more realistic that they just move into the observatory as it’s where they work on stuff* * *Originally I was thinking they might move to a factory hall or hangar or maybe even one of the lower levels of a sky scraper but it might be more realistic that they just move into the observatory as it’s where they work on stuff*
* *Annie has never been on a boat so they fix one up and hop over to Rogue Tides* * *Annie has never been on a boat so they fix one up and hop over to Rogue Tides*
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* *trading or bartering* * *trading or bartering*
* *getting the telescope and the dish going* * *getting the telescope and the dish going*
* *first contact with moon* * *first contact with moon*
* *moon part of the story* * *Lena dies*
* *Emily takes off from the moon*
* *\[done, needs revision\] Emily lab incident*
* *they have to, at some point, climb on a sky scraper - maybe even multiple times* * *they have to, at some point, climb on a sky scraper - maybe even multiple times*
* moon girl lands * Emily enters the atmosphere
* depending on how, they might need to find her * something goes wrong - either fuckup or technical failure or both
* something else? Idk, probably not * she realizes that she is descending waay too fast and tries mentally going through the emergency checklist
* Emily lands
**Individual missions:** **Individual missions:**
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* the rest died of some disease caused by a dangerous pathogen * the rest died of some disease caused by a dangerous pathogen
* the remaining ppl are infected and sick * the remaining ppl are infected and sick
* all but Emily will die * all but Emily will die
* the girl will recover and make her way down to Earth in an escape capsule * Emily will recover and make her way down to Earth in an escape capsule
* either, she lands in some kind of shuttle * she escapes the capsule with a parachute and the capsule leaves a crater in the ground
* or she jumps out of the capsule with a parachute and the capsule leaves a crater in the ground * James
* either one should happen somewhere near Nova Metropolis
* Nomad
* has found space images and is mildly obsessed with them * has found space images and is mildly obsessed with them
* has heard of a somewhat intact observatory in Sentinel Shores * has heard of a somewhat intact observatory in Sentinel Shores
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* Annie, in her search for an alternative to whatever the underground city has as "coffee", obtains some drug from the electronics tinkerer. She proceeds to get high as the sky and gets herself into a dangerous situation before the others catch on to what’s happening. Jack will end up more or less forcing her back to the base and sit there watching her so she doesn’t do anything stupid. * Annie, in her search for an alternative to whatever the underground city has as "coffee", obtains some drug from the electronics tinkerer. She proceeds to get high as the sky and gets herself into a dangerous situation before the others catch on to what’s happening. Jack will end up more or less forcing her back to the base and sit there watching her so she doesn’t do anything stupid.
* Emily wakes up. A relative is waiting in her room, silently crying. Emily, catching on to what’s going on (and having experienced the bad news of the past how ever many weeks, months, or years), asks who died this time. Some other person, Idk. That leaves 5 alive ppl in the moon base. * Emily wakes up. A relative is waiting in her room, silently crying. Emily, catching on to what’s going on (and having experienced the bad news of the past how ever many weeks, months, or years), asks who died this time. Some other person, Idk. That leaves 5 alive ppl in the moon base.
* Followed by a moon funeral? Idk. * Followed by a moon funeral? Idk.
* Emily gets it into her head to try the left over chemicals from Tony’s lab on herself ("Might as well, I’m gonna die anyway..."). She runs into the lab carrying a hammer, followed by the other still alive person/people. As she runs through the door, she smashes its control panel causing the door to close and lock. Then she looks around and proceeds to drink whatever is left of Tony’s experiments - to the protest of the other person/people. This is followed by pain rushing through her body and her collapsing on the ground. She still registers that the door gets broken open before drifting out of consciousness. * When Emily recovers (in a different chapter), Lena says something to the effect of "that should have killed you".
* She will drift in and out of consciousness a couple times.
* getting carried through the base
* vomiting in her bed
* When she recovers (in a different chapter), the other alive person says something to the effect of "that should have killed you".
* Lena dies sitting against a boulder next to the grave of her spouse. Emily sits there with her, periodically exchanging oxygen canisters until she dies. They talk over the radio. Lena tells her that she was ultimately right to use what Tony had left behind but it is too late for her now. After she dies, Emily returns to the base and lies down on the floor in a central room looking out though the ceiling for who knows how long (not eating or drinking for like 6h or so). * Lena dies sitting against a boulder next to the grave of her spouse. Emily sits there with her, periodically exchanging oxygen canisters until she dies. They talk over the radio. Lena tells her that she was ultimately right to use what Tony had left behind but it is too late for her now. After she dies, Emily returns to the base and lies down on the floor in a central room looking out though the ceiling for who knows how long (not eating or drinking for like 6h or so).
* Something should happen that gets her to get up and realize how incredibly hungry she is - possibly an incoming call / terminal beep from Earth * Something should happen that gets her to get up and realize how incredibly hungry she is - possibly an incoming call / terminal beep from Earth
* Emily is alone, preparing for her descent to Earth. As part of the preparations, she releases the remaining lab mice into the biosphere module (they came from there originally). * Emily is alone, preparing for her descent to Earth. As part of the preparations, she releases the remaining lab mice into the biosphere module (they came from there originally).