From 92d2b4e007bc1de8fe5157159dffadd3a9c808c1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BodgeMaster <> Date: Mon, 19 Jan 2026 09:30:57 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] 'na' Telescope: revision --- na-Telescope.html | 36 ++++++++++++++++++------------------ 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) diff --git a/na-Telescope.html b/na-Telescope.html index 36f7655..1d4cae9 100644 --- a/na-Telescope.html +++ b/na-Telescope.html @@ -22,25 +22,25 @@ The pavement is cracked and has potholes, and the highway is partially overgrown but, despite this, its condition is somehow good enough. Michelle floors it and the truck rattles and shakes as it accelerates - on the uneven asphalt. James hangs on to the handle - in the door as the remains of the city outskirts fly by. - Michelle takes notice:
- James, relax, that seat belt is gonna hold - you.
- How are you not absolutely terrified by the - speed?
- You get used to it... Also, I know very well - what I can or can't do with this car – I used to drive the - same back then.
- Maybe add a section about Dora acting up? + on the uneven asphalt. James is occupied with calming down Dora for + a momenr. Eventually, even though she is really too big for that, he + takes her on his lap so she can look outside.
+ As he looks back up, he says: Holy shit! + How are you not absolutely terrified by this?
+ Michelle responds: You get used to it... Also, + I know very well what I can or can't do with this car – + I used to drive the same back then. + She glances over at him and adds: Relax, that + seat belt is gonna hold you.

- Within a few minutes, they make it out of Ivydale, leaving its valley - behind. The mountains make way for an area of plains and shallow hills. - The large, rusty signs above still indicate the proximity of - Sentinel Shores where they haven't faded completely. Following - them, Michelle takes an exit onto another highway that leads north, - around the western part of Ivydale's lower side. + The ruins of the city outskirts fly by. Within a few minutes, they make + it out of Ivydale, leaving its valley behind. The mountains make way for + an area of plains and shallow hills. The large, rusty signs above still + indicate the proximity of Sentinel Shores where they haven't + faded completely. Following them, Michelle takes an exit onto another + highway that leads north, around the western part of Ivydale's + lower side.

After a while, they approach what used to be the outskirts of @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@

Meanwhile, Jack has found a way upstairs. The staircase has partially - collapsed so he moves one of the filing cabinets in their place and + collapsed so he drags one of the filing cabinets in their place and climbs to the next floor.