'qb' Banished: revision and finish a dialog
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themselves and they all, including herself, sit down around a somewhat
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themselves and they all, including herself, sit down around a somewhat
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large table. One of the suits takes the word:<br />
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large table. One of the suits takes the word:<br />
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<span class="comment">Does that work in English?</span><br />
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<span class="comment">Does that work in English?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">Under normal circumstances, robbery,
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<span class="quote speech">Before you go to trial, we have something
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compromising operationally critical systems, and conspiracy of terrorism
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to discuss with you. You are being accused of breaking and entering,
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would land you in <span class="comment">jail? prison?</span> for a long
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robbery, interfering with law enforcement, compromising operationally
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time. We're willing to make an exception here since you caused rather
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critical systems, and conspiracy of terrorism. Some of these charges
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little actual harm – if you are willing to accept this deal...</span>
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alone will land you in prison for a long time – unless you take
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this deal...</span><br />
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He grabs few sheets of paper from his bag <span class="comment">
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He grabs few sheets of paper from his bag <span class="comment">
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Aktentasche?</span> and slides them over.<br />
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Aktentasche?</span> and slides them over.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Basically admit to everything you're
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<span class="quote speech">Basically admit to everything you're
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accused of and you will get to leave Sunside Cove. You'll be free
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accused of and you will be banished instead of going to prison.</span>
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as long as you never come back.</span><br />
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She absentmindedly acknowledges what he said as she is already reading
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She absentmindedly acknowledges what he said as she is already reading
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the first page.<br />
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the first page.<br />
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<span class="comment">Isabelle questions the deal.<br />
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After reading it, she says: <span class="quote speech">There's
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What about bogus charge xyz? take it or leave it<br />
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a bunch of things in here that aren't true.</span><br />
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What are they trying to get out of this deal? avoiding controversy and
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<span class="quote speech">Take it or leave it.</span><br />
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removing her from the city<br />
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<span class="quote speech">What are you getting out of this?</span><br />
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Are they going to honor it?
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<span class="quote speech">We don't want troublemakers like you
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here – nor do we want controversy.</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">What will happen if I sign this?</span><br />
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<span class="quote speech">You will be removed from Sunside Cove.</span>
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<span class="quote speech">And in practical terms?</span><br />
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Another one of the suits answers:
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<span class="quote speech">There is an ongoing power outage to parts
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of the city. We will have to send a group of people
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<span class="comment">delegation?</span> outside to fix it.
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You will join them and not return.</span><br />
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She looks back at the pages.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">Okaay.</span><br />
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The other pages are some half filled-out forms. She is given a pen and
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told to fill in the rest.
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</p>
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<p class="comment">
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<p class="comment">
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Note: It was always intended that at least some of the rebels who got
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Note: It was always intended that at least some of the rebels who got
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