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 <h1> Lab Rat </h1>
-<p class="comment">
-  If you are here for reading, skip past the outline.
-</p>
-<p class="comment">
-  Outline:
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-<ul>
-  <li class="comment">
-    At this point, there are three survivors on the moon base:
-    <ul>
-      <li class="comment">
-        Emily
-      </li>
-      <li class="comment">
-        Lena
-      </li>
-      <li class="comment">
-        other crew member
-      </li>
-    </ul>
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    The other crew member is close to dying
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    Begin with dialog
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    Emily grabs a hammer and runs through the base followed by Lena
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    She reaches the lab and smashes the control panel for the dorr while
-    running inside causing the door to close and lock
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    She drinks some left over chemical concoction
-    <ul>
-      <li class="comment">
-        possibly after messing with it following some instructions she finds
-      </li>
-    </ul>
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    Lena starts to break the door open, the other person just arrives there
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    Emily&apos;s body is filled with pain and she falls to the floor
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    the door gets broken open just before she drifts out of consciousness
-  </li>
-  <li class="comment">
-    she drifts in and out of consciousness
-    <ul>
-      <li class="comment">
-        getting carried down the hallway
-      </li>
-      <li class="comment">
-        in her bed vomiting
-      </li>
-    </ul>
-  </li>
-</ul>
 <p>
   <span class="quote speech">Why not?</span><br />
   Emily looks back and forth between Lena and Sasha.<br />
   <span class="quote speech">Tony said he had some success with his mice,
   why shouldn&apos;t we try it?</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Tony also died after</span> &ndash; Sasha is
-  interrupted by coughing &ndash; <span class="quote speech">after trying it
+  <span class="quote speech">Tony also died after...</span> Sasha is
+  interrupted by coughing. <span class="quote speech">...after trying it
   on himself.</span><br />
   <span class="quote speech">Not like anything else is gonna happen to
   us...</span><br />
