From 9c5e120c7513769ab90d174735875a56a1f9861a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Mon, 20 Nov 2023 19:49:11 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] 'oa' Lab Rat: remove redundant outline, format a line of
dialog
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Lab Rat
Lab Rat
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- If you are here for reading, skip past the outline.
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- Outline:
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- At this point, there are three survivors on the moon base:
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- Emily
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- Lena
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- other crew member
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- The other crew member is close to dying
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- Begin with dialog
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- Emily grabs a hammer and runs through the base followed by Lena
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- She reaches the lab and smashes the control panel for the dorr while
- running inside causing the door to close and lock
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- She drinks some left over chemical concoction
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- possibly after messing with it following some instructions she finds
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- Lena starts to break the door open, the other person just arrives there
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- Emily's body is filled with pain and she falls to the floor
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- the door gets broken open just before she drifts out of consciousness
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- she drifts in and out of consciousness
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- getting carried down the hallway
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- in her bed vomiting
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Why not?
Emily looks back and forth between Lena and Sasha. Tony said he had some success with his mice,
why shouldn't we try it?
- Tony also died after – Sasha is
- interrupted by coughing – after trying it
+ Tony also died after... Sasha is
+ interrupted by coughing. ...after trying it
on himself. Not like anything else is gonna happen to
us...