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+++ b/oa-Lab_Rat-Emily_lab_incident.html
@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
   Emily looks back and forth between Lena and Sasha.<br />
   <span class="quote speech">Tony said he had some success with his mice,
   why shouldn&apos;t we try it?</span><br />
-  <span class="quote speech">Tony also died after...</span> Sasha is
-  interrupted by coughing. <span class="quote speech">...after trying it
-  on himself.</span><br />
+  Sasha says: <span class="quote speech">Tony also died after...</span>
+  He is interrupted by coughing. <span class="quote speech">...after trying
+  it on himself.</span><br />
   <span class="quote speech">Not like anything else is gonna happen to
   us...</span><br />
   Lena shakes her head.<br />
@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@
 <p>
   The walls are lined with workbenches and cupboards above them. In the
   center is an additional large workbench where Tony&apos;s lab mice are
-  still running around in their cage, oblivious to the situation. Emily had
-  kept them as pets after he died.
+  still running around in their cage, entirely oblivious to the situation.
+  Emily had kept them as pets after he died.
 </p>
 <p>
   Banging on the door &ndash; Lena is outside. Emily walks over to the