From bb72134e64ea85171458dc4e96f6739e405c2554 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Tue, 11 Feb 2025 08:42:00 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] 'oa' Lab Rat: minor wording changes

---
 oa-Lab_Rat-Emily_lab_incident.html | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/oa-Lab_Rat-Emily_lab_incident.html b/oa-Lab_Rat-Emily_lab_incident.html
index 02751d8..a2abf6c 100644
--- a/oa-Lab_Rat-Emily_lab_incident.html
+++ b/oa-Lab_Rat-Emily_lab_incident.html
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
   She storms off into the hallway; Lena jumps up and runs after her.
 </p>
 <p>
-  As she runs through the door to the lab module, she smashes the hammer
+  As she runs through the door to the lab module, Emily smashes the hammer
   into its control panel. Arcing noises, the hissing of air pressure
   getting released, the broken equipment alarm beeps. The door comes
   falling down behind her, slamming into the floor and latching with a
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
   drinks the liquid. It has a pungent smell and burns in her throat but she
   downs it in two gulps. The door moves up a bit. Through the opening, she
   hears Lena struggling on the other side. A foot appears in the door,
-  followed by Lena&apos;s hands. Emily begins to feel dizzy, she sets the
+  followed by her hands. Emily begins to feel dizzy, she sets the
   beaker onto the center workbench and holds on to the edge of the work
   surface. Lena slowly lifts the door and pushes it back into the ceiling,
   holding a screwdriver in her mouth. The panel covering the latching
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
 <p>
   She wakes up briefly while getting carried down the hallway. The pain is
   unbearable. In an attempt to scream, she sighs before everything goes
-  black again. The next time she regains consciousness is while throwing
-  up in her bed. She gasps for air, then she drifts away again.
+  dark again. The next time she regains awareness is while throwing up
+  in her bed. She gasps for air, and drifts away into unconsciousness.
 </p>
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