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@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
   <br />
   James follows them and also says <span class="quote speech">clear</span>
   as he reaches the platform. Annie hesitates.<br />
-  Jack looks up to her from the next platform down and says:
+  Jack looks up at her from the next platform down and says:
   <span class="quote speech">Come on Annie, you got this, it&apos;s gonna
   hold.</span><br />
   <span class="quote speech">I&apos;m scared.</span><br />
@@ -46,15 +46,36 @@
   <span class="quote speech">We just need to get past the door, the water
   inside will be moving a lot slower.</span><br />
   Michelle and Annie decide to stay back, Jack and James approach the door
-  from the side. The two pick up a large rock and throw it right in
+  from the side. The two pick up a large rock and throw
+  <span class="comment">huck?</span>
+  it right in
   front of the door. It starts rolling immediately and, within seconds,
   tumbles off the edge.<br />
   Jack calls out to the girls:
-  <span class="quote speech">You were right.</span><br />
+  <span class="quote speech">Looks like you were right.</span><br />
+  Michelle asks: <span class="quote speech">Can you say that again?</span>
+  <br />
+  He says <span class="quote speech">no</span>, failing to
+  suppress a smile.<br />
+  James notices an access hatch a few meters up on the other side of
+  the door.<br />
+  <span class="quote speech">Look, up there, that thing seems
+  almost reachable.</span>
 </p>
-
-<p class="comment">this is in the middle of the chapter after they went
-  downstairs and tried to explore the turbine hall, back up in the tunnel
+<p>
+  The guys back away from the door and make their way over to the railing
+  at the edge of the platform. From there, they try to wade to the other
+  side. James goes ahead, taking a few cautious steps forward before the
+  current gets too strong. He attempts to hold on to the desolate railing
+  It breaks instantly, leaving hime with a roughly 20 centimeter long
+  piece of rust in his hand. Jack pulls him back from the strongest part
+  of the current.<br />
+  <span class="quote speech">Welp, I guess that&apos;s that. Not gonna
+  try this again.</span><br />
+  They return to the girls and they all decide to head back up.
+</p>
+<p class="comment">
+  Missing paragraph
 </p>
 <p>
   Jack turns the key and the gate starts to move up, scrathcing and