From be5b871cd6740481ab8321514cd76182e8339fb5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BodgeMaster <> Date: Thu, 19 Oct 2023 19:42:55 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] 01, 04: Move the printer segment back where it fits better --- 01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html | 146 +------------------------------------ 04-Return_Null.html | 59 +++++++++++++++ 2 files changed, 61 insertions(+), 144 deletions(-) diff --git a/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html b/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html index 4150a79..b1fd78c 100644 --- a/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html +++ b/01-Wake_Up-Jack_intro.html @@ -101,23 +101,6 @@ Welp, that's that. He puts it back on the wall.

-

- Need to tie this together - or, alternatively, Jack printing the logs - could be moved to after the Annie interaction as something Jack can do - to pass time. -

-

- He walks over to the the teleprinter and opens the lid to find that - something has eaten most of the paper. He removes the remains and opens - one of the cabinets under the desks. By some miracle, whatever ate the - paper didn't find the rest. He tears off a piece of the stack and - puts it into the printer, feeding the end into the tractor mechanism. - Then, he sits down at the terminal and logs on. - This should be rephrased to indicate that there - is some purpose to him opening the lid in the first place, like him - wanting to change the ribbon bc it's no doubt deteriorated or something - like that. -

 Tue, 2106-06-01, 18:01
 
@@ -129,123 +112,14 @@ Welcome to INUX!
 $ █

- Over a hundred years, huh...
+ Over a hundred years, hm...
He types a few commands.

-
-$ ls
-$ pwd
-/home/jack
-$ cd /var/log
-$ ls
-cron outpost dmesg.log wtmp
-$ cd outpost
-$ ls
-comms comms_diag event logbook
-$ cat logbook > /dev/ttyS1
-$ █
-
-

- The printer comes to life and starts printing. Jack gets up and walks - over to it. The printer prints. And it prints some more. The paper - reaches the floor. Jack picks up the end and holds it, folding the pages - along the perforated lines as they reach his hands. Finally, the printer - stops to print. Jack turns the wheel on the side of the printer, manually - advancing the feed mechanism, until he reaches the end of the page. Then, - he tears it off and takes the small stack of paper back to the terminal - desk. Trying his luck with the lamp again, he flips the switch multiple - times until it stays on. -

-
-2000-01-01 Automated Announcement:
-    Happy New Year 2000!
-    //TODO: ASCII art of above line with fireworks
-
-    The outpost diagnostics suite reports no critical problems at any of
-    our outposts. The Lunar Biosphere has, so far, not needed assistance
-    from any of the outposts.
-    Good work, everyone!
-
-    The Future Is Bright.
-
-2002-08-15 Lunar Biosphere:
-    Crew wakeup command
-
-    Message:
-    //TODO
-//TODO: more log messages left by people
-

- Outline of missing section: + Outline of missing section(s):

-
  • - phone is broken -
    • -
  • - computer and terminal work still -
  • Jack tries to dial into a bunch of known modems, finally succeeding when reaching AgriWorks diff --git a/04-Return_Null.html b/04-Return_Null.html index 0716ad0..37a720c 100644 --- a/04-Return_Null.html +++ b/04-Return_Null.html @@ -30,5 +30,64 @@ Annie needs to go to meet the library guy
    • +

    + This has been moved here from chapter 1 "Wake Up". It should + be integrated into this chapter instead. +

    +

    + He walks over to the the teleprinter and opens the lid to find that + something has eaten most of the paper. He removes the remains and opens + one of the cabinets under the desks. By some miracle, whatever ate the + paper didn't find the rest. He tears off a piece of the stack and + puts it into the printer, feeding the end into the tractor mechanism. + Then, he sits down at the terminal and logs on. + This should be rephrased to indicate that there + is some purpose to him opening the lid in the first place, like him + wanting to change the ribbon bc it's no doubt deteriorated or something + like that. +

    +
    +$ ls
+$ pwd
+/home/jack
+$ cd /var/log
+$ ls
+cron outpost dmesg.log wtmp
+$ cd outpost
+$ ls
+comms comms_diag event logbook
+$ cat logbook > /dev/ttyS1
+$ █
+
    +

    + The printer comes to life and starts printing. Jack gets up and walks + over to it. The printer prints. And it prints some more. The paper + reaches the floor. Jack picks up the end and holds it, folding the pages + along the perforated lines as they reach his hands. Finally, the printer + stops to print. Jack turns the wheel on the side of the printer, manually + advancing the feed mechanism, until he reaches the end of the page. Then, + he tears it off and takes the small stack of paper back to the terminal + desk. Trying his luck with the lamp again, he flips the switch multiple + times until it stays on. +

    +
    +2000-01-01 Automated Announcement:
+    Happy New Year 2000!
+    //TODO: ASCII art of above line with fireworks
+
+    The outpost diagnostics suite reports no critical problems at any of
+    our outposts. The Lunar Biosphere has, so far, not needed assistance
+    from any of the outposts.
+    Good work, everyone!
+
+    The Future Is Bright.
+
+2002-08-15 Lunar Biosphere:
+    Crew wakeup command
+
+    Message:
+    //TODO
+//TODO: more log messages left by people
+

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