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   warm up, he walks over to the rack and sits down on the floor in front
   of it. He inspects the status lights on the various devices, thinking
   aloud: <span class="quote speech">CPU is idle, serials are idle,
-  cryogenics control unit sees one active chamber, primary hard drive is
-  powered up &ndash; all good. Secondary hard drive is powered down,
-  let&apos;s change that...</span> He pushes the power button and hears
-  the spindle motor kick on. The power button blinks. There is some
-  intermittent rattling from the drive, probably a shot bearing.
-  He hears the platters inside accelerate for an unusually long time.
-  Impatiently sitting there, Jack waits for the drive to be ready.
-  Clicking from the mechanism unlocking the heads followed by a ringing
-  scratching noise. <span class="quote speech">Of course.</span> He
-  quickly presses the power button again. The scratching stops and the
-  spindle motor turns off, followed by the platters slowly decelerating.
+  one active cryogenic chamber, primary hard drive is spinning &ndash;
+  all good. Secondary hard drive is powered down, let&apos;s change
+  that...</span> He pushes the power button and hears the fans kick in.
+  The spin-up button starts blinking. He waits for a moment to let the
+  fans blow away any dust that may have settled inside the drive, then he
+  pushes it. The spindle motor kicks on. There is some intermittent
+  rattling from the drive, probably a shot bearing. He hears the platters
+  inside accelerate unusually slowly. Impatiently sitting there, Jack waits
+  for the drive to be ready. Clicking from the mechanism unlocking the
+  heads followed by a ringing scratching noise.
+  <span class="quote speech">Of course...</span> He quickly presses the
+  power button again. The scratching stops and the spindle motor turns off,
+  the spindle still rattling occasionally as the platters spin down.
   <span class="quote speech">That&apos;s gonna be an ugly head crash.
   No manuals for me, I guess...</span>
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