From c8c204d7719c4973230ecc196635e77813bc22a4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BodgeMaster <> Date: Thu, 2 Jan 2025 09:06:37 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Multiple chapters: Old changes (see long description) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit My old laptop broke and I just finally got around to getting the files off its SSD. I have no idea what exactly I was working on back then. It’s been a while. --- pa-Bare_Necessities.html | 180 ++++++++++++++++++ pa-Basic_Needs.html | 106 ----------- pq-diesel_creek.html | 56 ++++++ ...=> ta-consulting-no_u_dont_have_train.html | 4 +- 4 files changed, 238 insertions(+), 108 deletions(-) create mode 100644 pa-Bare_Necessities.html delete mode 100644 pa-Basic_Needs.html create mode 100644 pq-diesel_creek.html rename ta-no_u_dont_have_train.html => ta-consulting-no_u_dont_have_train.html (96%) diff --git a/pa-Bare_Necessities.html b/pa-Bare_Necessities.html new file mode 100644 index 0000000..d92ec62 --- /dev/null +++ b/pa-Bare_Necessities.html @@ -0,0 +1,180 @@ + Bare Necessities + +

Bare Necessities

+

+ Jack is driving the truck towards a dried-out river. On the other side, + a bit in the distance, is a group of houses that – while they + certainly have? have certainly? seen better + days – don't look abandoned. Jack says + Hold on! + Festhalten? and drives into the + river bed. +
+ TODO: mention Annie in this paragraph +

+

+ The truck struggles to get traction while driving up the other river + bank, eventually getting stuck in the sand. He backs up and turns into + the river, accelerates, then steers back onto the bank – to no + avail, the truck gets stuck again.
+ Well... fuck.
+ He turns back into the river once more. The engine roars and the wheels + fling sand everywhere. Jack shifts gears, the needle on the speedometer + slowly creeps up, then he goes for another attempt. The suspension + bottoms out as the wheels plow into the river bank, but the truck does + barely make it out.
+ + + + Ouch. Annie holds her shoulder where + the seat belt had dug into it. Can we not do + that again, please?
+ I'll... try to keep it in mind, + sorry.
+ He turns around and drives onto the overgrown remains of a road leading + towards the settlement. +

+

+ Jack parks the truck in front of an old store.
+ This is it, I guess.
+ They get out and start walking towards the door. A small dog runs up to + them, barking, jumping around, running in circles, and wagging its tail. + It picks up a stick and drops it in front of Annie. She crouches down + and pets the dog.
+ Jack says: I'm gonna be inside. + more elegant way of saying "I need to take a + piss. Hopefully, they have a toilet. + + + + + + I'll be right there.
+ Okay. Jack disappears into the store. + She picks up the stick, gets up and holds it just out of reach of the + dog. It jumps back and forth a couple times looking at her.
+ You wanna play fetch, do you? +

+

+ Annie throws the stick a few times, then she follows Jack into the store. + Its shelves are sparsely stocked with a random assortment of things, + roughly sorted into categories: + Hand tools, boxes full of hardware, household chemicals, bars of soap, + a few clocks and watches, books, and more. Half of the store seems to be + dedicated to food though the shelves are mostly empty. Behind the counter + is a man who appears to be in his 60s, talking to Jack:
+ No, we don't sell food. What you see + there is strictly rationed. Since the river name + has changed course, we don't even have enough water to grow + crops for ourselves. The cisterns and wells simply don't + cut it.
+ Okay... What if we supplied you with + water?
+ The man interrupts the conversation and looks at Annie:
+ Good afternoon, what can I do for you? +
+ I'm with him.
+ I see.
+ He turns back to Jack:
+ Listen, the amount of water we need can't + simply be carried here or we'd do it ourselves. And we need it + constantly and consistently, not just once.
+ I know you need an industrial quantity of + water. We can get you an industrial quantity of water. Will you give us + food if we supply you?
+ He musters Jack for a moment.
+ Who is we and how do you wanna + accomplish that?
+ We are a small group of people living in + a bunker south of Ivydale. Two of us have extensive knowledge of + old world technology that we can put to use.
+ The man looks at him with skepticism.
+ Jack continues: Let the how be my + problem to solve. If we make it happen, will you supply us with + food?
+ You're gonna have to discuss that with + the others. Wait outside.
+ He disappears through a door behind the counter. Annie and Jack leave + the store and, once outside, Annie asks:
+ So how do you wanna accomplish that? + Sounds like you have a grand plan already.
+ Not really, but I'm pretty sure I will + within the hour. If all else fails, we could fix up a flatbed + truck, bolt a tank to it, and drive it here. +

+

+ While they wait, the small dog runs up again. They play fetch for a bit + until a group of people, amongst them the man from the store, approaches + them. A few handshakes later, Jack repeats his suggestion. A man in his + 40s, who seems to be in charge, says: + Your intentions are ... ambitious. I doubt + you can do it but I don't see any harm in agreeing. If you + manage to restore a permanent water supply, you can have all the food + you want.
+ Someone else throws in: Within reason. +
+ Yes, within reason. Any objections? +
+ He looks around. Someone raises a hand.
+ Yes?
+ We're not just gonna feed these people + forever, are we?
+ Jack replies before the one in charge gets a chance: + We need to feed maybe ten people for a few + months while we establish a settlement in the south of Ivydale. + + + + +
+ The one in charge responds: That's a lot. + Let's say two months.
+ Okay.
+ Then we have a deal.
+

+

+ A few people keep questioning the feasibility until Jack puts a stop + to it:
+ Ladies and gentlemen, whether it can be done + will be our problem. Now I would like to see what we have to work with. + Can I have a look at that irrigation system?
+ The one in charge turns to a girl: + Mary, can you go, show them around? +
+ Sure. She takes a step towards Annie + and Jack. Follow me. The closest access point + is right there, behind the store.
+ They walk around it and onto a field of withering? + plants. A large, partially buried pipe with just the top exposed + goes through it with an access hatch roughly in the center of the field. + Right next to the hatch is a Gestell? with + a boom to lower a large bucket into the access hatch.
+ Jack asks: Is it all like this, a net of + buried pipes?
+ Mostly. In the greenhouses, it's just + an open channel?.
+ Where do these pipes lead?
+ They all connect to a large + round buried tank from where another pipe + leads to the intake. It's a bit of a walk but I can show you. +
+ She gestures for them to follow but Jack stops her:
+ Wait, we can take the truck.
+ That's your car?
+ Her sudden excitement seems to take Jack by surprise.
+ Uhh... yeah.
+ That's so cool! I've only ever seen + the broken ones by the side of the road. We gonna drive there? +
+ If you show the way.
+ Heck yeah! +

+

+ Not sure of this should be the end of a chapter or if I should continue + here.
+ One thing that has happened is that this chapter, while written from + Annie's perspective, has her be a passive bystander without even + having any introspection for most of it. This needs to be adressed + somehow. +

+ diff --git a/pa-Basic_Needs.html b/pa-Basic_Needs.html deleted file mode 100644 index a44f346..0000000 --- a/pa-Basic_Needs.html +++ /dev/null @@ -1,106 +0,0 @@ - Basic Needs - -

Basic Needs

-

- Jack drives into a dried-out river. In the distance on the other side is - a group of houses that, while they have certainly seen better days, - don't look abandoned. The truck struggles to get traction in the - sand on the other side of the river and eventually gets stuck. - Well fuck. Jack backs up and turns - into the river. He accelerates, then steers back onto the river bank - – to no avail, the truck gets stuck again. He turns back into the - river. The engine roars. First gear, second gear, third gear... -

-

- The suspension bottoms out as the truck plows uphill through the sand, - barely making it out of the river. Annie holds her shoulder, it hurts - from getting pushed into the seat belt.
- Can we not do that again, please?
- response?
- Jack turns around and drives onto the overgrown remains of a road leading - to the settlement. -

-

- He parks in front of an old store.
- This is it, I guess.
- They get out and start walking towards the door. A small dog runs up to - them, barking, jumping around, running in circles, and wagging its tail. - It picks up a stick and drops it in front of Annie. She crouches down, - pets the dog, and picks up the stick.
- I'll be right there, Annie says - to Jack before throwing it.
- Okay. Jack goes into the store. -

-

- After playing fetch for a bit, Annie follows. Behind the counter is a man - who appears to be in his 60s. He is talking to Jack:
- I mean in the long run. We have plenty of food - right now but, since the <river name> has changed course, we - don't even have enough water to grow crops for ourselves. The - cisterns and wells simply don't cut it.
- So, basically, you're saying you need - water.
- The man interrupts the conversation and looks at Annie:
- Good afternoon, what can I do for you? -
- I'm with him.
- I see.
- He turns back to Jack:
- Listen, we don't just need a little bit of - water. The amount of water we need can't simply be carried here or - we'd do it ourselves. And we need it regularly and consistently. - When the <river> still flowed here, water used to flow into our - irrigation system upstream and got distributed to all the fields and - greenhouses from there.
- I know you need an industrial quantity of - water. We can get you an industrial quantity of water. Will you give us - food if we supply you?
- "Who is *we*?"
- He musters Jack for a moment.
- And how do you wanna get it here?
- By train - assuming the railroad south of here - is in a serviceable state. Seeing the man's confusion, Jack - adds: Let that be my problem to solve. Will - you trade water for food?
- I'm gonna have to discuss that with the - others. Wait outside. -

-

- After playing with the dog some more, they get approached by a group of - people, amongst them the man from the store. They shake hands. Jack - repeats his idea to supply water by train in exchange for crops.
- What's this train you're talking - of?, one of them asks.
- A large vehicle from the old world. It drives - on tracks like the ones that should be south of here.
- So that's what these rails were used - for... But that's still pretty far from here, how do you wanna - transport the water here?
- That irrigation system of yours... Can we take - a look at it?
- I see where you're trying to go with - this. It's still not particularly close to the rails. -

-

- After a bit of additional back and forth, they agree on a plan. The man - who did most of the talking asks a girl:
- Mary, can you go, show them around? -
- Sure, follow me. - It's a bit of a walk...
- Wait, Jack stops her, - We're here with a truck.
- So that's your car? Cool! - I've only ever seen one working car in the city. So we're - gonna drive there?
- If you show us the way.
- Let's go! -

-

- Not sure of this should be the end of a chapter or if I should continue - here. The way this has turned out, it would also be nice if they ended up - delivering construction machines (excavators, etc.) to the village so - they don't need to rely on water shipments past the day when the - protagonists leave for Nova Metropolis. -

- diff --git a/pq-diesel_creek.html b/pq-diesel_creek.html new file mode 100644 index 0000000..b8879f7 --- /dev/null +++ b/pq-diesel_creek.html @@ -0,0 +1,56 @@ + Diesel Creek +

Diesel Creek

+ +

+ Michelle asks: And you really expect to find + one here that isn't beyond repair?
+ They are walking into a valley in a large forested area.
+ Jack replies: I'm not even sure this is + the right place. Everything looks so different. But if it is, we'll + have plenty to choose from. Not optimistic about any of the hydraulic + excavators but we had some older cable-driven diggers + right word? on site that we might get + working.
+ research that needs to be done: + When were hydraulic excavators invented? + When did they get the ability to use a jackhammer attachment? + When did the cable-driven ones go out of fashion?
+ James says: Look, over there.
+ He gestures towards a group of very rusty and completely overgrown + machines and vehicles standing amidst the trees.
+ Jack says: That one to the right is similar to + what we're looking for.
+ They walk up to the machines.
+ Jack turns to Annie and James, patting the side of the machine he pointed + out a moment earlier. It has a sort of arm in the front with a huge scoop + thingy on the end.
+ We're looking for something like this but + with steel cables going from back here up there and to the boom. +
+ James asks: Why not use this one?
+ 'Cause this thing's done for. + Beyond repair, as Michelle put it.
+ How can you tell?
+ Jack walks to the front and points to some parts on the arm of the + machine. These rods used to extend and retract + to move the boom. They need to be perfectly smooth and fit together + exactly or they'll leak the oil inside.
+ They take a quick look at the other machines. There is another, smaller + excavator, a Kipper?, a + Wie heißt diese Maschine mit Förderband, die Material sortiert? + , and two Radlader?.
+ Annie asks: How did all of these get + inbetween the trees?
+ The trees weren't here when they were + used. This is why I had such a hard time finding this place.
+ + + + Annie asks: Is this how the dome was dug + out?
+ Well... no. That was mostly done using + explosives. But we had a large fleet of machines for all sorts of + tasks.
+

+ + diff --git a/ta-no_u_dont_have_train.html b/ta-consulting-no_u_dont_have_train.html similarity index 96% rename from ta-no_u_dont_have_train.html rename to ta-consulting-no_u_dont_have_train.html index e42bc23..4b25eb5 100644 --- a/ta-no_u_dont_have_train.html +++ b/ta-consulting-no_u_dont_have_train.html @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ - No U Don't Have Train. -

No U Don't Have Train.

+ Consulting +

Consulting

The following is a conversation between Jack and someone from the train company.