02 Unlikely Encounter, 'zd' Nova Metropolis: use one consistent time format across the whole story
four digit 12h time with leading zeromaster
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Annie closes the door behind herself and locks it. As she takes a breath
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Annie closes the door behind herself and locks it. As she takes a breath
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of the slightly humid air, she steps back onto the sidewalk to look at
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of the slightly humid air, she steps back onto the sidewalk to look at
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the clock above the entrance... 8:25 PM – the realization of how
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the clock above the entrance... 08:25 PM – the realization of how
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much time had passed hits: Normally she'd be at home already. She
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much time had passed hits: Normally she'd be at home already. She
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starts walking towards the metro station at the corner. The buildings
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starts walking towards the metro station at the corner. The buildings
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here are similar to the ones in residential areas – three to four
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here are similar to the ones in residential areas – three to four
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<span class="quote speech">Jack is gone</span>, Annie notices while
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<span class="quote speech">Jack is gone</span>, Annie notices while
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entering the bus. She looks around.<br />
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entering the bus. She looks around.<br />
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<span class="quote speech">There's a note on the table: "Will
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<span class="quote speech">There's a note on the table: "Will
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be back at 6:30"</span><br />
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be back at 06:30"</span><br />
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Michelle looks at her watch. <span class="quote speech">It <i>is</i>
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Michelle looks at her watch. <span class="quote speech">It <i>is</i>
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6:30.</span><br />
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06:30.</span><br />
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James chimes in: <span class="quote speech">I guess there's nothing
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James chimes in: <span class="quote speech">I guess there's nothing
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to do but wait. He'll show up soon enough.</span><br />
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to do but wait. He'll show up soon enough.</span><br />
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Michelle says: <span class="quote speech">I sure hope so.</span><br />
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Michelle says: <span class="quote speech">I sure hope so.</span><br />
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