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<span class="quote speech">You survived that?</span><br />
<span class="quote speech">That was the least of my challenges.</span>
<br />
He chuckles and briefly tells her how he found himself trapped inside
and that the people of the dome city helped him repair the door.
He chuckles and briefly tells her how he found himself trapped inside,
that one of the computer&apos;s hard drives is broken, and how he turned
to the dome city for help.
</p>
<p>
Michelle&apos;s dizziness starts to go away and the burning sensation
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starting with his preservaton chamber breaking down. It takes him about
an hour, including answering Michelles questions.
</p>
<p class="comment">ToDo: tie this together</p>
<p>
<span class="quote speech">How have you been dealing with food?
I imagine the stockpile was already pretty low?</span><br />
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and puts it back in the oven to re-heat them.
</p>
<p>
<span class="comment">Idk they eat, guess I&apos;ll need to describe that
in a bit more detail... Michelle might be having a really good and really
bad time at the same time. Jack eats like three of them potatoes with
roughly a ton of the dip. Then they get ready to leave.</span>
After the meal, they step outside and Michelle gets her first look
around.<br />
<span class="quote speech">Oddly familiar, and yet so different.</span>
<br />
<span class="comment">the scene where Jack opens the door should
have a short description of the lay of the lands</span><br />
The two decide to walk up to a <span class="comment">crest? ridge?</span>
not far from them on the other side of the valley. Beyond it is Ivydale,
once a large city housing just over a million people &ndash; only one of
<span class="comment">who? whom? which?</span> remains to behold its
overgrown ruins.
<br />
Michelle says: <span class="quote speech">I mean I knew it already but
seeing it like this just hits differently.</span><br />
</p>
<p>
They step outside and, following what remains of the old path, start
walking. It is narrow and winded, overgrown, and has partially
disappeared. Jack walks ahead, only half following the path, half making
it up as he goes. Michelle struggles to follow, slowly falling behind.
After a while, he stops abruptly, looking down at something, then up,
then down again. Then, he turns to Michelle who is catching up to him
and says: <span class="quote speech">Well, that could be a reason why
<span class="comment">ToDo: tie this back together</span><br />
Following what remains of an old path, the two start making their way up
the mountain above the bunker. The path is narrow and winded, overgrown,
and has partially disappeared. Jack walks ahead, only half following it,
half making it up as he goes. Michelle struggles to follow, slowly
falling behind. After a while, he stops abruptly, looking down at
something, then up, then down again. Then, he turns to Michelle who is
just catching up and says:
<span class="quote speech">Well, that could be a reason why
the uplink is down &ndash; it literally <i>is down</i>...</span>.
Michelle reaches the edge and and sees what Jack had stopped for:
A large <span class="comment">ravine? wash?</span> extends towards the