From d5592d24b7192fd90cf0d9467a54f4cd00b2e161 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BodgeMaster <>
Date: Mon, 13 Nov 2023 08:45:59 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] 'va' Alone: continue writing

---
 va-Alone-Lena_death.html | 15 +++++++++++----
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/va-Alone-Lena_death.html b/va-Alone-Lena_death.html
index a5ee308..515ef39 100644
--- a/va-Alone-Lena_death.html
+++ b/va-Alone-Lena_death.html
@@ -150,11 +150,18 @@
   through the airlock and looks for a full oxygen bottle. She lifts one
   out of its rack and carries it back to Lena. She opens the life support
   unit and closes the valves on it and the empty bottle, then she replaces
-  it and opens the valves again. <br /><span class="comment">
-  missing: Emily&apos;s LSU is also empty. She replaces the oxygen bottle
-  and returns, sitting down next to Lena for company.</span>
+  it and opens the valves again. Just as she is done with that, her own
+  alarm goes off. <span class="comment">Disappointed/annoyed reaction</span>
+</p>
+<p>
+  Emily looks at Lena &ndash; she had closed her eyes. As if she knew Emily
+  was looking she opens them, looking directly at her.
+  <span class="comment">Gripping?</span> her hand as she speaks.
+  <span class="comment">some meaningful last words?</span> Then she lets go
+  and closes her eyes again. A couple minutes later, she stops breathing.
+  <span class="comment">wording?</span>
 </p>
 <p class="comment">
-  missing: time jump, Lena dies, etc.
+  missing: Emily returns inside, lays down on the floor
 </p>
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